Petite correction

[maël - missme]

Bonjour JRB

 

j'ai un doute sur ma phrase. Est-elle correcte ? Merci

 

In America, children have change their lifestyle so today there are a lot of obeses.

[Jean B]

Bonjour Maël,

il y a 1 minute, maël - missme a dit :

In America, children have changed their lifestyle so today there are a lot of obeses <(*) persons/people.

<(*) obese n'a que la fonction adjectif en anglais.

Rappel utile : present perfect =  auxiliaire has/have conjugué au présent + participe passé du verbe.

 

[maël - missme]

Merci JRB

je continue et poste la suite.

 

Merci

[maël - missme]

Voilà.

Je travail sur "should"

 

As far as I'm concerned, parents shoud watch more their children and they shoud make them to eat more healthy. I think it's important that children do exercice so they should all join  a club. I think school  shoud teach children how cook good food. To me, children shouldn't spend a lot of time on video games but they should cut down on screens. In my opinion, the government should make more prevention to solve this health problem.

 

Merci

 

 

 

 

[Jean B]

il y a 15 minutes, maël - missme a dit :

Voilà.

Je travaille sur "should" <Serais-tu étourdi ? "Le travail c'est la santé", chantait Henri Salvador. ?

As far as I'm concerned, parents shoud watch more their children more carefully and they shoud make them to eat more healthy food. I think it's important that children do exercise so they should all join a club. To me, children shouldn't spend a lot of time on video games but they should cut down on screens. In my opinion, the government should (pas d'idée) to solve this health problem.

Sois attentif à cette constante : un auxiliaire modal est toujours suivi d'un infinitif sans to.

À présent je vais prendre ma douche, il est grand temps ! ?

 

[maël - missme]

Merci  et bonne douche alors?