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[maël - missme]

Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît me corriger ? Merci

Explain the differences between your life style and  your parents' lifestyle when they were your age. Rédiger un paragraphe que vous m'envoyer en utilisant des éléments de comparaisons

 

 

When my parents were my age, their lifestyle was different from mine. For exemple, I have a computer and a mobile whereas they didn't have. Contrary to me, my parents read many books. My parents played board game whereas I play video games. I go to school by bus unlike my parents. They diddn't go on holiday unlike me. I wear designer clothes whereas my parents didn't.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir Maël,

il y a une heure, maël - missme a dit :

When my parents were my age, their lifestyle was different from mine. For example, I have a computer and a mobile whereas they didn't (have). Contrary to me, my parents read many books. My parents played board games whereas I play video games. I go to school by bus unlike my parents who did so on foot/by bike. < À toi de voir They didn't go on holiday unlike me. I wear designer clothes whereas my parents didn't.

Sans vouloir te défriser, je reste sur ma faim.

[maël - missme]

Bonjour JRB. Oui je sais. Je développerai.