Ussop Posté(e) le 26 décembre 2019 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 26 décembre 2019 Bonjour, j'avais une synthèse à faire sur l'art en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un peux me corriger ou me dire si je dois ajouter quelque chose ou enlever. Merci d'avance. We say about art that it's an action of an individual to create something in order to share a message, of course it can be perceived in different ways depending on who you are. To begin, it's important to know that art is not new. When we talk about prehistoric art, we immediately think of the caves decorated with prehistoric motifs for example the Lascaux cave or Chauvet cave. In antiquity, it was Aristote, a famous Greek philosopher of antiquity, who decided to classify the arts in an order called the classification of the arts. We find in this classification, first architecture, second sculpture, third painting, fourth music, fifth literature, six drama and later we add cinema as seventh art. In all these arts we recognize the artistic gesture and the beauty that it to transmit to us. It's important to note that among all arts, it's surely music that has the strongest power, because music is universal it can be understood by everyone. In its simplest and most sophisticated forms it puts the mind in a trance. But today it's undoubtedly the cinema that affects most people. Honestly who has never seen a Spielberg or Tarantino film and has never cried or felt shivers in front of it or recently we also have "Sorry we missed you" by Ken Loach. Young or adult, no one escapes it. But despite the monopolization of art by cinema, the ancient arts still retain an important place. For example, we can mention several works of art such as Brancuzi's "the kiss" or Picasso's "Au Lapin Agile". These works are famous over the world and now cost millions of dollars. Citer Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 27 décembre 2019 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 27 décembre 2019 Bonjour et bienvenue sur e-bahut. Le 26/12/2019 à 23:45, Ussop a dit : Bonjour, j'avais une synthèse à faire sur l'art en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un peux me corriger ou me dire si je dois ajouter quelque chose ou enlever. Merci d'avance. We say about art that it's <(*)> Art is said to be an action of an individual to create something in order to share a message, of course it can be perceived in different ways depending on who you are. To begin, it's important to know that art is not new. (*) La tournure passive permet et facilite une généralisation. When we talk about prehistoric art, we immediately think of the caves decorated with prehistoric motifs for example the Lascaux cave or Chauvet cave. In antiquity, it was Aristote, a famous Greek philosopher of antiquity, <redondance who decided to classify the arts in an order called the classification of the arts.<Il s'agit des arts en général, de tous les arts => absence de déterminant In this classification we find (*) first architecture, second sculpture, third painting, fourth music, fifth literature, six drama and later we add cinema as the seventh art. (*) Mieux vaut ne pas séparer le COD de son verbe, d'où la modification de l'ordre des termes. In all these arts we recognize the artistic gesture and the beauty that it to transmit <Le sujet est double = verbe au pluriel > are passed down to us. It's important to note that among all arts, it's surely music that has the strongest power because music it is universal so that it can be understood by everyone. In its simplest and most sophisticated forms it puts the mind in a trance. But today it's undoubtedly the cinema that affects most people. Honestly who has never seen a Spielberg or Tarantino film and has never cried or felt shivers in front of it? <Une interrogative se termine par un point d'interrogation et donc nouvelle phrase> Just recently we also had "Sorry we missed you" by Ken Loach. Young or adult, no one escapes it. But despite the monopolization of art by cinema, the ancient arts still retain an important place. For example, we can mention several works of art such as Brancuzi's "the kiss" or Picasso's "Au Lapin Agile". These works are famous over the world and now cost millions of dollars. Mon conseil du jour : une petite révision des règles d'emploi/omission du déterminant "the" ne serait pas superflue. Bonne continuation et tous mes voeux de réussite dans tes études actuelles et à venir. Citer Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
Ussop Posté(e) le 27 décembre 2019 Auteur Signaler Share Posté(e) le 27 décembre 2019 Merci beaucoup. J'essayerai d'appliquer votre conseil. Citer Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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