sarah23000 Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 Bonjour j'ai une critique de film à faire sur Charlie et la chocolaterie est ce qu'il serait possible que quelqu'un m'aide à la corriger. Merci Book Review Charlie and the chocolate factory was written by Roald Dahl. He was born on September 13, 1916 and died on November 23, 1990 in the United Kingdom. He was a writer and a British screenwriter. He has mostly written novels and short stories, such as Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, one of his best-known books, and has been adapted around the world many times. This is the story of Charlie Bucket, a little boy who lives with both parents and four grandparents in a tiny house. It's a very poor family. In the city where they live, there is the Wonka chocolate factory, closed for years but which has reopened its doors, so that all over the world, 5 children receive a golden ticket hidden in a bar of chocolate. For Charlie's birthday, his parents buy him a Wonka chocolate bar, but no gold ticket. Shortly after, Charlie finds money in the street and tries to buy a new chocolate bar containing a gold ticket. He will spend the day in the chocolate factory with his grandfather Willy Wonka and four other children. At the end of the day, there was only him left and Willy Wonka decided to take over his chocolate factory. From beginning to end, we do not think for a minute that Willy Wonka will sell his chocolate factory to Charlie Bucket especially when at first his parents offer him the chocolate bar and there will be no ticket. It is good that the author is taken the child who most cherish me to have the chocolate as much financially as for his personality to be the main character of the history. I really like the Oompa-Loompas songs that sing whenever a child has to leave because they touch or do something wrong. I liked the fact that Charlie prefers to go back to live with his parents and leave the chocolate factory to stay with his family and not leave her without him. So, finally, the whole family, Bucket, take their house to put in the chocolate factory and live there. I think I liked everything, the whole book. The main idea of the book is that even with luck it is the one who deserves the most that is winning. Charlie Bucket being very poor and therefore with very little money to buy a chocolate bar was therefore very unlikely to find a golden ticket and even less to be the successor Willy Wonka. Charlie and the chocolate factory is a fiction because in the book all the chocolate can not exist in reality but the life of charlie bucket is that of full of little boy. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 Bonjour, il y a 33 minutes, sarah23000 a dit : Bonjour j'ai une critique de film à faire sur Charlie et la chocolaterie est ce qu'il serait possible que quelqu'un m'aide à la corriger. Merci Book Review Charlie and the chocolate factory was written by Roald Dahl. He was born on September 13, 1916 and died on November 23, 1990 in the United Kingdom. He was a writer and a British screenwriter. He has mostly written novels and short stories such as Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, one of his best-known books, and has been adapted around the world many times. This is the story of Charlie Bucket, a little boy who lives with both parents and four grandparents in a tiny house. It's a very poor family. In the city where they live, there is the Wonka chocolate factory, closed for years but which has reopened its doors, so that all over the world, 5 children receive a golden ticket hidden in a bar of chocolate. For Charlie's birthday, his parents buy him a Wonka chocolate bar, but no gold ticket. Shortly after, Charlie finds money in the street and tries to buy a new chocolate bar containing a gold ticket. He will spend the day in the chocolate factory with his grandfather Willy Wonka and four other children. At the end of the day, there was only him left and Willy Wonka decided to take over his chocolate factory. From beginning to end, we do not think for a minute that Willy Wonka will sell his chocolate factory to Charlie Bucket especially when at first his parents offer him the chocolate bar and there will be no ticket. It is good that the author is taken the child who most cherish me to have the chocolate as much financially as for his personality to be the main character of the history. < C'est totalement incompréhensible. Qu'as-tu voulu dire ? I really like the Oompa-Loompas songs that sing are sung whenever a child has to leave because they touch or do something wrong. I liked the fact that Charlie prefers to go back to live with his parents and leave the chocolate factory to stay with his family and not leave her without him. < C'est censé signifier quoi ? So finally, the whole Bucket family take their house to put in move it into the chocolate factory and live there. < to move into = emménager I think I liked everything, the whole book. The main idea of the book is that even with luck it is the one who deserves the most that is winning wins. Charlie Bucket being very poor and therefore with very little money to buy a chocolate bar was therefore very unlikely to find a golden ticket and even less to be the successor of Willy Wonka. Charlie and the chocolate factory is a fiction because in the book all the chocolate cannot exist in reality but the life of charlie Bucket is that of full plenty of/many little boys. Une fois de plus, écrire en anglais ne consiste pas à "traduire" ce que l'on a écrit d'abord en français, c'est une hérésie totale ; la preuve dans mes deux interrogations ci-dessus. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
sarah23000 Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 Auteur Signaler Share Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 Est ce que c'est mieux. Charlie and the chocolate factory was written by Roald Dahl. He was born on September 13, 1916 and died on November 23, 1990 in the United Kingdom. He was a writer and a British screenwriter. He has mostly written novels and short stories, such as Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, one of his best-known books, and has been adapted around the world many times. This is the story of Charlie Bucket, a little boy who lives with both parents and four grandparents in a tiny house. It's a very poor family. In the city where they live, there is the Wonka chocolate factory, closed for years but which has reopened its doors, so that all over the world, 5 children receive a golden ticket hidden in a bar of chocolate. For Charlie's birthday, his parents buy him a Wonka chocolate bar, but no gold ticket. Shortly after, Charlie finds money in the street and tries to buy a new chocolate bar containing a gold ticket. He will spend the day in the chocolate factory with his grandfather Willy Wonka and four other children. At the end of the day, there was only him left and Willy Wonka decided to take over his chocolate factory. From beginning to end, we do not think for a minute that Willy Wonka will sell his chocolate factory to Charlie Bucket especially when at first his parents offer him the chocolate bar and there will be no ticket. I really like the Oompa-Loompas songs that are sung whenever a child has to leave because they touch or do something wrong. I liked when Charlie preferred not to take chocolate factory to live his family. So finally, the whole Bucket family, take their house to move it into the chocolate factory and live there. It's good that the author is chosen to take a character with that personality as the main character. I think I liked everything, the whole book. The main idea of the book is that even with luck it is the one who deserves the most that wins. Charlie Bucket being very poor and therefore with very little money to buy a chocolate bar was therefore very unlikely to find a golden ticket and even less to be the successor of Willy Wonka. Charlie and the chocolate factory is a fiction because in the book all the chocolate cannot not exist in reality but the life of charlie bucket is that of plenty of of little boys. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 25 février 2019 Il y a 22 heures, sarah23000 a dit : Est ce que c'est mieux ? Plutôt que soumettre une seconde mouture, j'aurais préféré que tu répondes à mes deux questions sur ta première version et cela aurait été plus logique. ...//... I liked when Charlie preferred not to take chocolate factory to live his family. < Est-ce qu'il t'arrive de te relire ? À la lecture de ce que j'ai mis en rouge, j'en doute. So finally the whole Bucket family take their house to move it into the chocolate factory and live there. It's a good thing that the author is chosen to take a chose to give the main character with that such a personality as the main character. < Efforce-toi de penser en anglais ; je sais que ce n'est pas évident mais on y parvient en persévérant. I think I liked everything, the whole book. ...//... Charlie and the chocolate factory is a fiction because in the book all the chocolate cannot not exist in reality but the life of Charlie Bucket is that of plenty of of little boys. Tu auras remarqué que j'ai omis les passages ne présentant aucune faute, ça me fait gagner du temps. Bonne continuation et bonnes vacances. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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