Nasser 12 Posté(e) le 17 novembre 2018 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 17 novembre 2018 Bonsoir, Je dois présenter un exposé lundi matin j’aimerai avoir de l’aide pour mon exposé merci pour votre aide. [ Introduction: introduire la notion, une question, présenter le plan puis dans le développement présenter les documents étudiés en classe - y compris les scripts - dans la mesure où ils sont en relation avec la problématique et conclure: répondez à la problématique et donnez votre avis ] Intro : to begin we will begin by defining the term progress, progress is the action of going forward, to grow, to be better.For a society or for humanity, progress is evolution in the direction of an improvement, its progressive transformation towards more knowledge and happiness. The notion of progress is a modern idea that opposes that of stability thatdominated in the past, It is especially in the nineteenth centurythat progress has become an economic or scientific notion. PB how do science and technology transform our lives At first we will see the different inventors and their science inventions that have marked history, then we will present the different documents that we studied in class. I) To begin at the beginning of the year we made a presentation on the various inventions of the man, I had chosen the vaccination, in my presentation I hadexplained that the vaccination was a method of protection against diseases, is that it saved millions of life that it does not reach yesterday, this method of protection dates back to the end of XVIII century ,Edward Jenner developed and tested the first smallpoxvaccine, . In 1885, another pioneer, the FrenchmanLouis Pasteur, began his first tests on the man of the vaccine against rabies . Pasteur is a pioneer who is known for his great knowledgein biology for having developed a vaccine against rabiesthat has saved millions of people ; II) Then we studied several documents, first we did an oral comprehension with a text called mapping out ourfuture, In this document he tells us about some thingsthat man has managed to do or to accomplish, such as exploring space, since 1969, men have landed on the moon, specifically by Neil Armstrong an American astronaut. and now there are satellites in Earth orbitand unmanned spaceships have landed on someplanets, showing that they have different climate and atmosphere He also explains that Einstein's theory of relativity allows one to travel in time. And that thereare millions of parallel universes, but because of the technical difficulties and enormous costs. thesePhysical Possibility may not be technically feasiblethen they tell us about the inventions that the militarycould build such as exolegs that will allow marketeffortlessly carrying heavy bags. There is even more invention such as nanobots that have a very small size, this invention will see inside a body of a patient more precisely in his digestive tract and at the end of the text it tells us about artificial intelligence that has the purpose of creating robots or computer smarter thanman. Then as a group we made a presentation on the frozen man,the man was frozen in 1714, is a group of skiers found himfrozen 2024. He takes her to the hospital and then theythawed her, incredibly the man the man woke up afterbeing thawed and he was in good health, And as a group we had to make him discover the progress that has takenplace in the world since 1714. One student was hibernatus(the frozen man) and the other were skiing, each skier hadto choose an aspect of modern life that he would explain to hibernatus . With different aspects such as transport, housing, communication, we will take the case of communication, a skier had to explain that communication has progressed a lot for a long time, communications weremore festais as before with letters, but now it is easy and fast. By sms, mail, or call. In addition we studied the young American inventors, theyinvented inventions to present to juries, he had more studentsto participate it was a lot of contest, the young studentparticipate to try to win the first prays to finance their studythen we saw some invention ; First Invention Charles Johnson in Texas invented the train detection device, whenever there is a bell thatwarns motorists that there is an approaching train and this prevents accidents Second invention was two girls from Boston built a very useful remote control for people with disabilities, To conclude first of all the progress in science we transformour lives because science has made it possible to fight againsta lot of diseases that man can not manage to turn with, like for example cancer, plague .., science to change our lives becausesince the invention of vaccination the lifespan is even longer, is the man is less affected by deadly diseases, Technology to change our life by that it has changed and facilitate a lot of things in the life of the man, like for example transport or communications, in my opinion the progress is a good thingby that it facilitates the human life, Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 18 novembre 2018 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 18 novembre 2018 Bonjour, Il y a 11 heures, Nasser 12 a dit : Bonsoir, Je dois présenter un exposé lundi matin j’aimerai avoir de l’aide pour mon exposé merci pour votre aide. [ Introduction: introduire la notion, une question, présenter le plan puis dans le développement présenter les documents étudiés en classe - y compris les scripts - dans la mesure où ils sont en relation avec la problématique et conclure: répondez à la problématique et donnez votre avis ] Intro : to begin < Waouh, tu commences fort avec la répétition ! > We will begin by defining the term progress: progress is the action of going forward, to growing, to being/becoming better. < Tu as commencé par un gérondif, il fallait continuer pour conserver la correction grammaticale. For a society or for humanity, progress is evolution in the direction of an improvement, its progressive transformation towards more knowledge and happiness. The notion of progress is a modern idea that opposes that of stability that dominated in the past. It is especially in the nineteenth century that progress has become < Le 19ème siècle, c'est du passé révolu > prétérit > became an economic or scientific notion. PB How do science and technology transform our lives? < C'est une question, non ? At first we will see the different inventors and their science inventions that have marked history, then we will present the different documents that we studied in class. I) To begin < Décidément ! Tu ne te relis donc pas ? > At the beginning of the year we made a presentation on the various inventions of the man, I had chosen the vaccination. In my presentation I had explained that the vaccination was < Ne le serait-elle plus aujourd'hui ? > is a method of protection against diseases is which/that it saved millions of life < Des millions, c'est un pluriel ! > lives that it does not reach yesterday, throughout the world. Nouvelle phrase > This method of protection dates back to the end of the XVIII century when Edward Jenner developed and tested the first smallpox vaccine. In 1885, another pioneer, the Frenchman Louis Pasteur, began his first tests of the vaccine against rabies on man. NB : tu as intérêt à revoir à fond dans ta grammaire les cas d'emploi et d'omission du déterminant "the" et à les mémoriser pour le jour de l'écrit du bac. Pasteur is < Ça fait quand même quelque temps qu'il a quitté le monde des vivants ! > was a pioneer who is known for his great knowledge in biology, for having developed a vaccine against rabies that has saved millions of people. II) Then we studied several documents: first we did an oral comprehension with a text called "Mapping out our future". In This document he tells us about some things that man has managed to do or to accomplish, such as exploring space, since 1969. Nouvelle phrase encore ! > Men have landed on the moon, specifically by Neil Armstrong an American astronaut. And now there are satellites in Earth orbit and unmanned spaceships have landed on someplanets, showing that they have different climate and atmosphere. He It also explains that Einstein's theory of relativity allows one to travel in time. And that there are millions of parallel universes, but because of the technical difficulties and enormous costs these physical possibilities may not be technically feasible. Then they tell us we are told about the inventions that the army/military could build such implements as exolegs that will allow market effortlessly carrying enable soldiers to carry heavy bags effortlessly. There is even more another invention such as nanobots that have a very small size, this invention so that they will see inside a body of a patient more precisely in his digestive tract and at in the end of the text it tells us about artificial intelligence that has the purpose of creating robots or computers smarter than man. Then as a group we made a presentation on the frozen man the man who died frozen in 1714 is and whose body was found by a group of skiers two mountaineers/climbers in 1991. < Avec tes camarades, revois tes sources ! He takes her was taken to the hospital and then they thawed her, where he was thawed. À partir de là, tu nages dans la science fiction, Ötzi ne s'est jamais réveillé ! Incredibly the man the man woke up after being thawed and he was in good health and as a group we had to make him discover the progress that had taken place in the world since 1714. One student was Hibernatus < Non, les scientifiques lui ont donné le nom de Ötzi (the frozen man) and the other were skiers, each skier had to choose an aspect of modern life that he would explain to Hibernatus . Vu que la suite est du même acabit que tout ce que j'ai lu et corrigé jusqu'à ce point, j'abandonne et te laisse à tes divagations. Sans vouloir t'offenser, ton anglais écrit est au niveau des pâquerettes et tu as intérêt à revoir les bases d'ici à juin prochain, faute de quoi tu cours droit à la catastrophe. With different aspects such as transport, housing, communication, we will take the case of communication, a skier had to explain that communication has progressed a lot for a long time, communications weremore festais as before with letters, but now it is easy and fast. By sms, mail, or call. In addition we studied the young American inventors, theyinvented inventions to present to juries, he had more studentsto participate it was a lot of contest, the young studentparticipate to try to win the first prays to finance their studythen we saw some invention ; First Invention Charles Johnson in Texas invented the train detection device, whenever there is a bell thatwarns motorists that there is an approaching train and this prevents accidents Second invention was two girls from Boston built a very useful remote control for people with disabilities, To conclude first of all the progress in science we transformour lives because science has made it possible to fight againsta lot of diseases that man can not manage to turn with, like for example cancer, plague .., science to change our lives becausesince the invention of vaccination the lifespan is even longer, is the man is less affected by deadly diseases, Technology to change our life by that it has changed and facilitate a lot of things in the life of the man, like for example transport or communications, in my opinion the progress is a good thingby that it facilitates the human life, Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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