Ceski Posté(e) le 9 novembre 2018 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 9 novembre 2018 Hello, Can you help me correct these sentences please ? Thank you ! E-mail : We sent e-mails for people that are registered on our website. In addition, we requets that websites like « 01net.com » or « clubic.com » to talk abour our product in their next newsletter that they send by e-mail to their users. Social Networks : Thanks to social networks such Facebook, Linkedin, Twitter, Instagram and You tube, it is easy to discover our products broadcasted on official accounts. User from these social networks have the possibility to ask questions and community managers from our company will provide Website : We have an official website that allows us to give informations about our products and sell them. We also have on our website, a space dedicated to the user so he could to ask questionspour and an other space concerning new about our glasses. - Do you like our product (or glasses) ? - What do you think about our product ? - Are you interrested by our produit ? - Which function of our product do you like the most ? - What price do you want ? - What function or improvement do you want ? Slideshow : Glasses multifonction LCO Description of our company : Name : LCO and Co Founded in : 2013 Founded by : XXX Located in : France (Bretagne) Main products : Television, overhead projector Typical customer : Mostly those who wear glasses Target market : - People who wear glasses - Young people ( 15-40 years old) Reaserch techniques to promove our product : Information for market research Results - Profile of respondents - 60% are women - 56% are between 21 and 35 years old - 59% are students - 39% earn less than 1200 € per month - 79% wear glasses, and 49% wear them every day - 21% prefer the Chanel brand - 40% prefer the function of the screen connected to the phone - Nearly one in two people prefer a black mount - 28% prefer round glasses - a quarter of people would like to try our glasses - 52% would like to buy our product - Among them, 48% would be ready to pay less than 200 € - 38% would like us to communicate our product using social networks - One in two is satisfied with our product idea Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 9 novembre 2018 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 9 novembre 2018 Hello, Email: We sent emails for to people that are registered on our website. In addition, we request that websites like/such as « 01net.com » or « clubic.com » to talk about our product in their next newsletter that they send by email to their users. < NB : Selon les spécialistes, ces 2 sites ont mauvaise réputation dans le milieu informatique. Social Networks : Thanks to social networks such as Facebook, Linkedin, Twitter, Instagram and You tube, it is easy to discover our products broadcasted on official accounts. Users from these social networks /have the possibility to/can ask questions and community managers from our company will provide them answers/information. < Je suppose. Website : We have an official website that allows us to supply/give informations about our products and sell them. We also have on our website a space dedicated to the user so he could to ask questions and another space one concerning new about our new glasses. < Je suppose encore ! - Do you like our product (or glasses)? - What do you think about our product? - Are you interested by our product? - Which function of our product do you like the most? < En anglais, le point d'interrogation se colle sans espace derrière le dernier mot ; j'ai rectifié. - What price do you want would you prefer? < Le conditionnel présent, dit de politesse, est préférable car moins comminatoire que l'indicatif présent. - What function or improvement do you want would you suggest? < Idem ci-dessus. Slideshow : Glasses multifonction LCO multifunction Glasses < Dans un nom composé, le nom noyau se place après. Description of our company: Name : LCO and Co Founded in 2013 Founded by XXX Located in France (Bretagne) Main products: Television, overhead projector Typical customer: Mostly those who wear glasses Target market: - People who wear glasses - Young people ( 15 - 40 years old) Research techniques to promote our product: Information for market research Results - Profile of respondents - 60% are women - 56% are between 21 and 35 years old - 59% are students - 39% earn less than 1200 € per month - 79% wear glasses and 49% wear them every day - 21% prefer the Chanel brand - 40% prefer the function of the screen connected to the phone - Nearly one in two people prefer a black mount - 28% prefer round glasses - a quarter of people would like to try our glasses - 52% would like to buy our product - Among them, 48% would be ready to pay less than 200 € - 38% would like us to communicate our product using social networks - One in two is satisfied with our product idea NB En anglais, les " : " se collent aussi sans espace derrière le mot précédent ; j'ai rectifié. Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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