Happiness

[tulip12]

Bonjour,

pourriez vous me guider sur l’introduction. Le sujet c’est happinness

Je dois Start with an attention-grabbing opener: a surprising fact, an interesting quotation, example or anecdote (but not a question)

[ariel]

bonjour,

j'ai deux proposition pour toi:

1. happiness is not a destination. it is a way of life.

2.happiness is not something ready made. it comes from your own actions.

[tulip12]

Il y a 1 heure, ariel a dit :

bonjour,

j'ai deux proposition pour toi:

1. happiness is not a destination. it is a way of life.

2.happiness is not something ready made. it comes from your own actions.

Voici la phrase dont j’ai ecris : Every person on earth felt an emotion. Some people feel sadness, others anger, and a few are into jealousy. We all want to be happy, but it seems that we all have a particular conception of happiness. Happiness can be achieve through health and love.

La phrase en rouge représente le thesis statement. J’ai besoin d’aide pour le topic sentence. 

 

Voici une exemple, de ma prof ; example of thesis statements and topic sentences:

•Topic: Physical Education

•Physical education should be compulsory in cegep because itimproves physical and psychological health.

•Physical education helps students develop good nutritional habits.

•Physical education helps students feel less stressed.

[ariel]

Le 17/04/2018 à 13:39, Itsme17 a dit :

Voici la phrase dont j’ai ecris : Every person on earth felt an emotion. Some people feel sadness, others anger, and a few are into jealousy. We all want to be happy, but it seems that we all have a particular conception of happiness. Happiness can be achieve through health and love.

La phrase en rouge représente le thesis statement. J’ai besoin d’aide pour le topic sentence. 

 

Voici une exemple, de ma prof ; example of thesis statements and topic sentences:

•Topic: Physical Education

•Physical education should be compulsory in cegep because itimproves physical and psychological health.

•Physical education helps students develop good nutritional habits.

•Physical education helps students feel less stressed.

bonjour,

happiness helps people feel better. happiness makes people smile. happiness is like the best feeling in the world. happiness helps with social relationship. happiness helps people feel less streassed and they feel more healthy. happiness Allows a longer life expectancy. happiness is the source of a lower mortality at the various ages. happiness helps people feel less stressed and less anxious.