Micka82 Posté(e) le 30 janvier 2017 Signaler Posté(e) le 30 janvier 2017 Hello there ! I don't know if that's the right place for this kind of matter, but I guess it changes from what you guys are used to on this board. I actually wrote a song and basically, I'd like to know whether it's grammatically correct or not. Here's the masterpiece: (hum hum, I'm joking obviously, that's pretty lightweight but my very first song in English, so... don't get hung up on its depth ) --------------------------------------------------------- Tell me the world is not what I see Tell me I’m good enough to live Tell me your heart’s still beating for me Tell me I’m wrong but please forgive My sins, my song My feelings are strong Feel my heart and my soul shining through. Feel my doubts and my fears around you. I belong to you. (x2) Tell me the sun warms the moon above us Tell me there are still so many stars in the sky Tell me the birds don’t fall when the rain is heavy Tell me I’m wrong but please forgive My sins, my song My feelings are strong Feel my heart and my soul shining through. Feel my doubts and my fears around you. I belong to you. (x2) --------------------------------------------------------- Hoping I don't bother with my song, Thanks in advance !
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 31 janvier 2017 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 31 janvier 2017 Hi again, Good job, I really enjoyed reading your song. I think your English is good enough not to need any correction whatsoever.
Micka82 Posté(e) le 31 janvier 2017 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 31 janvier 2017 Oh, alright then, thank you JRB for the proofreading, and the compliment Have a nice day
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 31 janvier 2017 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 31 janvier 2017 My pleasure. Have a nice day too.
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