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[devoirelise]

Bonsoir, j'aimerais que l'on m'apporte de l'aide concernant un texte en anglais car j'ai oral dans deux jours et j'ai peur qu'il y'ait quelques erreurs à l'oral  Merci d'avance ! 

 

Where did you grow up? Can you tell me a little bit about it?

I was growing up in Dottignies, in the middle of the village; I was living in a small house with my father, my mother, and my brother.

What's your earliest memory of when you are very young?

My earliest memory is when I was in the kindergarten class. My teacher was reading every day a story, and after the story i went to the canteen with my brother, because before my brother was in the same class.

Where you the sort of person who had lots of friends or were you a best friend girl?

When I was young, I had a lot of friend because I was the clown of the class.

Were you shy as he child? How would you describe yourself?

When I was young I wasn't shy, but I was a clown and a troublemaker

[Jean B]

 

Bonsoir,

Il y a 1 heure, devoirelise a dit :

Bonsoir, j'aimerais que l'on m'apporte de l'aide concernant un texte en anglais car j'ai oral dans deux jours et j'ai peur qu'il y'ait quelques erreurs à l'oral  Merci d'avance ! 

 

Where did you grow up? Can you tell me a little bit about it?

I was growing grew up in Dottignies, in the middle centre of the village. <Même si tu n'es pas âgée,  c'est du passé révolu =  simple past I was living live in a small house with my father, my mother, and my brother.<Tu y habites encore, du moins je le pense = présent simple.

What's your earliest memory of the time when you are were very young? <C'est encore du passé révolu = simple past. J'ai du mal à comprendre pourquoi tu peux employer un présent.

My earliest memory is  dates back to the days when I was in the kindergarten class.<date back to = remonter à, c'est un peu plus explicite que be  My teacher was reading used to read a story every day a story and after the story I went to the canteen with my brother because before my brother was in the same class in those days. <used to + V = avait l'habitude de + infinitif // in those days = à cette époque là

Where you the sort of person who had lots of friends or were you a best friend girl? <Sois attentive à ce que tu écris et relis toi pour éviter ce genre de bévue.

When I was young, I had a lot of friend because I was the clown of the class.

Were you shy as he a child? How would you describe yourself? <Idem ci-dessus !

When I was young I wasn't shy, but I was a clown and a troublemaker.

 

 

 

 

[devoirelise]

Un grand merci d'avoir corrigé mon texte  Bonne soirée