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Quelqu'un pourrait corriger ce texte pour moi merci d'avance!!!!!!

I think that we should close fast food. Because they make a lot of money. We do not know exactly what there is inside. Is not a food healthy. There are too many restaurants like that. Then there are all the same advantages in fast foods as : it cooks fast. We have many choices on the food each finds what he is looking for. there are of any kebab, humberguer, nugget, ice, pizza, sandwiches. Later for those who work late it is an advantage because they close late. Certain fast food deliver and the food is good. But there are also disadvantages which are much more important than the advantages. The disadvantages is dear. We are hungry at the end of two hours, it's far too fat, salty and sweet. It too chemical because there is a lot of debate on the composition.

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