Bac notion de pouvoir

[clems33440]

Bonjour, 

Voici ma synthèse sur la notion Power j'aimerais connaitre les faute que j'ai pu faire.

Cordialement Clems33440

I am going to give a definition of power is the ability to control others governments make laws to exercise force. However, there is also a counter power to resist these laws. In class, we asked ourselves: “How did Great Britain exert its power to build and extend its empire throughout history?”
Foremost, I will talk about two extracts of movie called Braveheart. Then, I will present an extract from a text whose title is “A passage to India “. Finally, I will talk about a cartoon from a website cartoonstock.com. The theme of all documents is the colonisation by the English.

                The first document is a movie about the colonisation of Scotland by his in 1280 A.D., and the main character is William Wallace from Scotland. In the first extract, the king of England implants a strategy to conquer Scotland. Because the king of Scotland is dead and he does not have any children. Therefore, the English king marries his son to daughter of the French king. His final goal is to exterminate the Scottish race. Then, the second extract is about a fight between Wallace and the English soldiers, since William is married in secret. So the English soldiers raped his wife but she defended herself. She was accusing of assault or a king’s, so the sheriff slit her throat. That is why William Wallace pretended to surrender but he fights the British with the help of villagers.

                Afterwards, I will talk about an extract from the novel entitled “A passage to India” written by E.M. Forster and published in 1924, before the independence of India. This passage is a quarrel between Mrs Moore and her son Ronny. In the extract, Mrs Moore reproaches her son for felt superior to the Indian people. Nevertheless, Ronny, is the servant of the British government, he must be a judge or a magistrates. Even by working-hard, he thinks the justice of Indian is corrupted. Finally, the author wants to denounce the attitude of the British officials in their colonies like India.

                Finally, the last document is a cartoon. The scene takes place at work, in an office. The room is decorates with a banner and colourful garlands. There are six colleagues: two Asian-looking people standing and the other colleagues are on their knees and boring. This attitude is related to the message on a banner that is “We apologize for the British Empire”. The message shows that some British feel ashamed of their colonial past so they want to make up for their behaviour.

[Jean B]

 

Bonsoir,

Il y a 4 heures, clems33440 a dit :

Bonjour, 

Voici ma synthèse sur la notion Power j'aimerais connaitre les fautes que j'ai pu faire.< De français aussi ?

Cordialement Clems33440

I am going to give a definition of power: it is the ability to control others. For example governments make laws to exercise force. <Sinon ta phrase est bancale However, there is also a counter an opposition power to resist these laws.< À ma connaissance et celle de mes dictionnaires, le nom counter power n'existe pas In class, we asked ourselves: “How did Great Britain exert its power to build and extend its empire throughout history?”
Foremost, I will talk about two extracts of the movie called Braveheart. Then, I will present an extract from a text whose title is “A passage to India “. Finally, I will talk about a cartoon from a website cartoonstock.com. The theme of all documents is the colonization by the English. <Aucun déterminant devant un nom employé dans la généralité.

 

                The first document is a movie about the colonisation of Scotland by his <? <N'aurais-tu rien oublié ? in 1280 A.D., and the main character is William Wallace from Scotland. In the first extract, the king of England implants a strategy to conquer Scotland. Because the king of Scotland is dead and he does not have any children. Therefore, the English king marries his son to the daughter of the French king. His final goal is to exterminate the Scottish race. Then, the second extract is about a fight between Wallace and the English soldiers, since William is married in secret. So the English soldiers raped his wife but she defended herself. She was accusinged of assault or a king’s, <??? so the sheriff slit her throat. That is why William Wallace pretended to surrender but he fights fought the British <? Are you sure? with the help of villagers.

 

                Afterwards, I will talk about an extract from the novel entitled “A passage to India” written by E.M. Forster and published in 1924, before the independence of India. This passage is a quarrel between Mrs Moore and her son Ronny. In the extract, Mrs Moore reproaches her son for felt feeling superior to the Indian people. Nevertheless, Ronny, is the servant of the British government, he must be a judge or a magistrates. Even by working hard, he thinks the justice of Indian justice is corrupted. Finally, the author wants to denounce the attitude of the British officials in their colonies like India.

 

                Finally, the last document is a cartoon. The scene takes place at work, in an office. The room is decorated with a banner and colourful garlands. There are six colleagues: two Asian-looking people standing and the other colleagues are on their knees and boringed. This attitude is related to the message on a banner that is “We apologize for the British Empire”. The message shows that some British feel ashamed of their colonial past so they want to make up for their behaviour.

 

Il est quand même anormal qu'à plusieurs reprises tu confondes la terminaison -ing active et la terminaison -ed passive. Relis-toi toujours attentivement. Bonne chance pour ton oral.

 

[clems33440]

merci beaucoup pour cette correction, je vais revoir les terminaison ing et ed

et je mot counter power c'est notre prof qui nous l'a donner

[Jean B]

Le 27/04/2016 at 20:16, clems33440 a dit :

merci beaucoup pour cette correction, je vais revoir les terminaison ing et ed

et je mot counter power c'est notre prof qui nous l'a donner

Vérifications faites, Linguee donne effectivement plusieurs exemples de counter-power ou counter power. Au temps pour moi, nobody's perfect. http://www.linguee.fr/anglais-francais/traduction/counter-power.html

[clems33440]

c'est pas grave je vous fâcher pas