Oral Espaces et Échanges

[Kitoudouble]

Bon jours j'aurez besoin d'aide pouvez vous jettez un coup d'oeil s'il vous plais

Merci d'avance
I’m going to talk about the notion “Space and exchanges”. This notion deals with the geographical and symbolic spaces that all societies occupy, and also the interactions between men and different societies. The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. So crossing the borders has become easier and faster and new modes of exchange are emerging. An exchange is when we give in return for something received and can take several forms: economic, cultural or movement of people…
I would like to speak about gap year, a theme of cultural interaction that more and more students experiment. To illustrate this theme, I have chosen two documents I studied in class.

 

The first document is << gap year advive for Parents : Are They a good thing >>

The second will be 4 imaged <<gap year student abroad>>

Space and exchange ans gap year , is well represented.

 

I intend to explain why a gap year is an exchange of services and cultures? I’m going to present, in the first time, the advantages brought by gapers, and in the second time, the benefits they receive by doing a gap year.

First of all, I would like to give a definition of this theme. A gap year is a break taken by students to engage in humanitarian or environmental projects. It’s generally a year after high school, for having experience in another country before starting graduate school.

 

The first document is < < gap year advive for parents: they Are has good thing? > > speak parents who are near sent their child so that he becomes mature and so that he can live their life while being independent, one thus see the opinion of these parents whose age their child is of 18ans, he advice it is a child to choose their own sabbatical year, make journey of the voluntary work, obtain one jobs, learn on other culture to appreciate them, it is the big opportunity for them which will allow to widen their horizon, it is the unique experience which will make us learn height on us even it is an enriching experience.

 

The second document is represent by images << has gap year students abroad >> one can see on these images an exchange. There is a mutual aid a mixture of culture, one can see that it is young having made one sabbatical year helps quite the others there fesant of the voluntary work in fesant to share their knowledge, him feel useful, he  they will allow of to increase to become mature independent..

In both documents, the arguments put forward are that doing a gap year is an enriching and interesting experience that can change your life. On the one hand, the gapers bring their services, their volunteer work and their knowledge, and on the other hand, they receive a lot of their experience which enriching their skill, their culture and can change your mind.
So a gap year is an exchange of services and cultures, and this theme is an interesting illustration of the notion “Space and exchanges”. If I have the opportunity, I would like to do a gap year in the USA.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Il y a 18 heures, Kitoudouble a dit :

Bon jours Bonjour, j'aurezais besoin d'aide. Pouvez-vous jettez jeter un coup d'oeil s'il vous plaist ? < Les fautes de français sont corrigées tout aussi bénévolement !

Merci d'avance
I’m going to talk about the notion “spaces and exchanges”. This notion deals with the geographical and symbolic spaces that all societies occupy and also the interactions between men and different various societies.< Fais l'effort de comprendre la différence de sens entre  "different " et " various ".The different various spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. So crossing the borders has become easier and faster and new modes of exchange are emerging. An exchange is when we give in return for something received and can take several forms: economic, cultural or movement of people…
I would like to speak about gap year, a theme of cultural interaction that more and more students experiment. To illustrate this theme, I have chosen two documents I studied in class.

 

The first document is << gap year advice for parents: are they a good thing? >>

The second will be 4 imaged ???  <<gap year student abroad>> space and exchange ans gap year, is well represented.< C'est une phrase ça ? Relis-toi donc, ça n'a pas de sens.

 

I intend to explain why a gap year is an exchange of services and cultures. I’m going to present, in the first time, the advantages brought by gapers students in their gap year, and in the second time, the benefits they receive by doing a gap year while spending it.<Sauf erreur, " gaper " n'a rien à voir avec quelqu'un prenant une année sabbatique ; c'est une  "mye " [nom féminin (latin myax, -acis, du grec muaks, -akos, moule) Mollusque bivalve des mers tempérées, aux valves disjointes laissant sortir deux longs siphons jumelés et qui vit enfoui dans le sable vaseux. (La mye, ou clanque, est comestible.)] Merci Larousse

First of all, I would like to give a definition of this theme. A gap year is a break taken by students to engage in humanitarian or environmental projects. It’s generally a year after high school, for having in order to get experience in another country before starting graduate school college / university studies. <Le but ne s'exprime pas avec for + V-ing mais par to / in order to + V

 

The first document is < < gap year advive for parents: they Are has good thing? > > speak parents who are near sent their child so that he becomes mature and so that he can live their life while being independent, one thus see the opinion of these parents whose age their child is of 18ans, he advice it is a child to choose their own sabbatical year, make journey of the voluntary work, obtain one jobs, learn on other culture to appreciate them, it is the big opportunity for them which will allow to widen their horizon, it is the unique experience which will make us learn height on us even it is an enriching experience. <Tout ceci n'est qu'un immonde charabia que j'ai renoncé à comprendre.

 

The second document is represent by images << has gap year students abroad >> one can see on these images an exchange. <??? There is a mutual aid, a mixture of culture, one can see that it is young having made one sabbatical year helps quite the others there fesant of the voluntary work in fesant to share their knowledge, him feel useful, he  they will allow of to increase to become mature, independent.< Bien que cela ressemble vaguement à de l'anglais, ça reste globalement incompréhensible.

In both documents, the arguments put forward are that doing a gap year is an enriching and an interesting experience that can change your life. On the one hand, the gapers < Voir plus haut bring their services, their volunteer work and their knowledge, and on the other hand, they receive a lot of their experience which enrichinges their skills, their culture and can change your their <Il faut être logique ! minds.
So a gap year is an exchange of services and cultures and this theme is an interesting illustration of the notion “space and exchanges”. If I have the opportunity, I would like to do spend a gap year in the USA. <Rien que ça ? Bon courage !

 

[Kitoudouble]

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