notion espaces et échanges

[juliahah]

Bonjour ou bonsoir. Serait-il possible de me corriger ma notion mythes et héros s'il vous plait merci d'avance.

 

I will talk about the concept of space and exchange worldwide. Before that, I'll give a short definition of this notion to fully understand it. This concept deals with the geographic and symbolic areas that all companies involved and the interaction between people and different societies. An exchange is the act of giving or receiving something in place of something else. In today's world these exchanges can take several forms: economic - labor exchanges, commodity exchange, trading across borders, cultural - the exchange of ideas, information, movement of persons, immigration. In this unit we will focus on the fact that migrants feel that life is better on the other side of the border. Indeed, they leave their city to settle the other with the hope of a better life and a future happier. To address this issue I'm going to help me several documents seen in class to answer the question: Enclosures can they stop us? First I will focus on different aspects that can be found beyond the barriers and then in a second step I will show that the will can sometimes exceed the limits and barriers.

In a document studied in class, we saw that the gates were not the only things that could hinder migrants to cross to the other side. The document is called "Is the grass really greener? ". It is an arid desert without vegetation, the soil is dry. There dotted lines on the ground, representing Mexican-American borders. On one side of the picture we find Uncle Sam with his funny pants mocked. It represents the US government. On the other side there are two Mexicans attempting to enter the US. They look for a work and a better life. But beyond Graphic display panels illustrate the disastrous state of the US economy. The US replaced the walls to make room for catastrophic patterns of their country. But it serves the same purpose: to deter potential immigrants. What works quite well: Mexican abandon their decision and give up the American dream.

Uncle Sam explains why the tables were set up, he seems confident that will be more effective than closing. Mexicans have realized that the grass is not always greener on the other side. The title invites immigrants to question their decision. We can see that the barriers are sometimes useless.

The second document studied in class will show us that despite the imposed barriers and risk taking, willingness, courage and hope are much stronger and can help us to overcome them. This document studied in class goes back before the Berlin Wall was built, before aouts 1961. This is a passage from the book of Douglas Kennedy, entitled "the moment." the passage is called "the last chance" and deals with the journey of a young woman from East Germany who leaves East Germany just before the authorities closed all borders. With it we find the second main character, the narrator of the story. We do not know more things about this man in this passage. It may well be American. They both are in an airplane. The woman tells her story and she is very nervous, she has joined her lover but she has not heard from him. It is important to understand that it was very hard to leave everything overnight without projects, or anyone. Those who decided escaped from their countries were also taking risk of never seeing their families, their friends, which was very hard to bear. They were not sure to see them one day. Also, they knew that those remaining could suffer from their flight because of their position in the party. But we can see in this story that sometimes the courage and strength of character were pushing people to see further and flee their country. Building a new life to feel it better.

To conclude I would say that people are escaping their countries are a lot of courage. This quality and willingness shoots to cross borders. Sometimes the conditions under which they cross this test are deadly. but still, the country's laws are stricter today. For example, in Arizona, a law passed in 2010 states that anyone suspected of being an illegal immigrant can be arrested and detained for questioning.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

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In a document studied in class, we saw that the gates were not the only things that could hinder migrants to cross to the other side. The document is called "Is the grass really greener? ". It is an arid desert without vegetation, the soil is dry. There are dotted lines on the ground representing the Mexican-American borders. On one side of the picture we find Uncle Sam with his funny pants mocked.< ??? It  represents the US government. On the other side there are two Mexicans attempting to enter the US. They are looking for a work and a better life. But in the background / beyond graphic display panels illustrate the disastrous state of the US economy. The US replaced the walls to make room for catastrophic patterns of their country. < ??? But it serves the same purpose: to deter potential immigrants, . What which works quite well: Mexicans abandon their decision and give up the American dream.< Après la virgule, le relatif which résume la proposition qui précède = ce qui... / chose qui...

Uncle Sam explains why the tables were set up, he seems confident that  xxx < un sujet ? will be more effective than closing. Mexicans have realized that the grass is not always greener on the other side. The title invites immigrants to question their decision. We can see that the barriers are sometimes useless.

The second document studied in class will show us that despite the imposed barriers and risk taking, willingness, courage and hope are much stronger and can help us to overcome them. This document studied in class goes back before the Berlin Wall was built, before aouts 1961. < Tu ne te relis donc pas ?This is a passage from the book of by Douglas Kennedy, entitled "the moment." the passage is called "the last chance" and deals with the journey of a young woman from East Germany who leaves East Germany just before the authorities closed all borders. With it we find the second main character, the narrator of the story. We do not know more details / things about this man in this passage. It  may well be American. They both are in an airplane. The woman tells her story and she is very nervous, she has joined her lover but she has not heard from him. It is important to understand that it was very hard to leave everything overnight without projects, or anyone. Those who decided escaped from their countries were also taking risk of never seeing their families, their friends, which was very hard to bear. They were not sure to see them again one day. Also, they knew that those remaining could suffer from their flight because of their position in the party. But we can see in this story that sometimes the courage and strength of character were pushing people to see further and flee their country. Building a new life to feel it better.

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[juliahah]

Merci pour votre réponse, je vais tenter de corriger mes fautes le plus vite possible. Merci encore.