Présentation

[LadyMel13]

Bonjour, il faut que l'écrive un court texte de présentation et j'aimerai que l'on me corrige les fautes de grammaire. Merci 

My name is Mélanie. I have one brother, his name is Baptiste. He doesn’t like reading books, but I love it. I think fantastic books contain a lot of exciting information about the functioning of our society. I love learn about history of France whereas the others in my class prefer palying video game. I usually listen to the advice and news who are given to me, maybe it’s because I have a social worker degree. I love spending time with my family, it allows me to de-stress and take news about everyone. In return, their are happy to see me again. My cousin can sing songs in English. I don’t drink cofee, I hate it. 
Nevertheless, I don’t agree with the speeling reform, I believe that children should learn to write correctly. There are two alternatives : we can write as we speak or we can write as scholars which makes the richness of our language. However, I agreed with the government who was in favour of teach children foreign languages in kindergarten. For example, if children can’t write accents they will not read texts of Rousseau and Voltaire. Young children are affected by the lack of dictation and by SMS language. Today most children can’t write emails correctly in French. I am in favour of the abandonment of reform.

[Jean B]

Bonjour, Mélanie, (alias lovemel05)

My name is Mélanie. I have one brother, his name is Baptiste. He doesn’t like reading books, but I love it. I think fantastic books contain a lot of exciting information about the functioning of our society. I love learning about the history of France whereas the others in my class prefer playing video games. I usually listen to the advice and news who  which are given to me, maybe it’s because I have a social worker degree. I love spending time with my family, it allows me to de-stress and take news about everyone. In return, their they are happy to see me again. My cousin can sing songs in English. I don’t drink coffee, I hate it. 
Nevertheless, I disagree/don’t agree with the spelling reform, I believe that children should learn how to write correctly. There are two alternatives: we can write as we speak or we can write as scholars, which makes the richness of our language. However I agreed with the government who was in favour of teaching children foreign languages in kindergarten. For example, if children can’t write accents they will not read texts of by Rousseau and Voltaire. Young children are affected by the lack of dictation and by SMS language. Today most children can’t write emails correctly in French. I am in favour of the abandonment of abandoning the reform.

Relis-toi toujours attentivement, ne serait-ce que pour éviter certaines petites bévues et évite de te disperser sur plusieurs forums.