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Comptoir des Vins

11 rue des vignerons,

75188 Paris Cedex 16.

 

 

Mr. John Heavydrinker,

Manager of the english company The French Wine Store

76 Onslow Gardens,

London SW7 QJ9

 

 

26 january 2016

 

 

Dear Mr Heavydrinker

 

 

Accuse receip of the order of 26 January

 

 

I write to you to prevent you that I could not provide the complete delivery by next February 15 due to out of stock.

I still have 20 bottles.

 

I propose a different product instead Night Saint Georges 2012 « Les Tonneaux » who got the medal of money Vinexpo Bordeaux last May.

 

This wine is of quality equal to the one that has control but its price is higher than 2 euros per bottle incl.

 

Is it okay for you ?

 

The complete command can be sent to your receptions agreement.

 

I took you sorry for the iconvenience

 

Your sincerely

 

André Petitjean

Purchansing Manager

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[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Comptoir des Vins

11 rue des vignerons,

75188 Paris Cedex 16.

 

Mr. John Heavydrinker,

Manager of the english company The French Wine Store

76 Onslow Gardens,

London SW7 QJ9

 

26 January 2016 < MAJUSCULE à tous les noms des mois.

 

Dear Mr Heavydrinker,

 

Accuse I acknowledge receipt of the order of 26 January for 150 bottles of Nuits-Saint-Georges rouge 2011.

I write to you to prevent you that I could not provide Unfortunately, I cannot provide the complete delivery by next February 15 due to out of stock shortage. I still have There are only 20 bottles left.

I propose a different product Instead, I can send a Night Nuits-Saint-Georges 2012 « Les Tonneaux » who which got the Vinexpo silver medal of money  in Bordeaux last May.

This wine is of equal quality equal < L'adjectif AVANT le nom ! to the one that has control you ordered but its price is higher than is 2 euros more expensive per bottle all-inclusive.

I can offer a 2% discount on the 2012 vintage to make up for the inconvenience. Should you agree to such an alternative, Is it okay for you ?  the complete command order can be sent to on your receptions of your agreement.

 

I took you am very sorry for the inconvenience and look forward to hear from you soon.

 

Yours sincerely,

 

André Petitjean

Purchasing Manager

Outre ses multiples approximations, ta lettre pue le logiciel de traduction et ça c'est le comble de l'immonde !

Conclusion : c'est la première et dernière fois que je t'aide.