Carte de voeux

[Noch]

Bonjour, 

Voici la carte de voeux que j'ai écris pour la famille chez qui j'étais cet été, à Cardiff. Pouvez-vous me dire si elle contient des fautes & si oui, lesquels? Merci!

 

Dear family ****,

I  send you all of my warmest thoughts and my best wishes for a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year! May you enjoy the time of the holidays with your nearest and dearest, family and friends, those who love you and care for you. Hoping that 2016 will bring you everything you could desire, a lot of happiness, love and a good health.
With kindest regards, 

******

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Dear **** family, < Dans ce nom composé, c'est le nom de famille qui joue le rôle de qualifiant ; il se place donc AVANT.

I  send you all of my warmest thoughts and my best wishes for a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year! May you enjoy the time of the holidays with your nearest and dearest relatives/next of kin family and friends, those who love you and care for you.< Attention au sens de family. Hoping that 2016 will bring you everything you could desire, a lot of happiness, love and a good health.
With kindest regards, 

******

Very good job!