roby67 Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 Signaler Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 NB Ce forum étant réservé à l'anglais, il est inutile de le mentionner dans le titre du sujet ! JRB bonjour pouvez vous me corriger ce texte merci Hello I'm Jane DupontI'm 15 years old. I like pop music and go often out with my friends. I live with my parents and my sister. I like reading cookbook and make them such good resets. I am quite calm, patient, and friendly but I am quite messy. I like my pastry put color. I do a lot of chocolate pastries. I love it but I do not like me too sweet pastry
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 Bonjour, Hello I'm Jane Dupont. < pointI'm 15 years old. I like pop music and often go out with my friends.< L'adverbe de fréquence AVANT le verbe. I live with my parents and my sister. I like reading cookbooks and make them such good resets recipes. I am quite calm, patient, and friendly but I am quite messy. I like my pastry put color. < Comprends pas ! Qu'as-tu voulu dire ? I do cook/make a lot of chocolate pastries cakes. I love it them but I do not like me too sweet pastry cakes.
roby67 Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 rebonjour j'ai amélioré le texte. Est ce qu'il y a encore des fautes Hello I'm Jane Dupont.I'm 15 years old. I like pop music and often go out with my friends. I live with my parents and my tween sister. I like reading cookbooks and make them such good recipes. I am quite calm, patient, and friendly but I am quite messy. I like put color in my pastry and cook a lot of chocolate cakes. My favorite recipes are cookies. It is composed of hazelnut butter and chocolate. It’s really a delight. I love them but I do not like too sweet cakes. I will be really happy to participate in the competition for the best pastry.
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 rebonjour J'ai amélioré le texte. Est-ce qu'il y a encore des fautes ? Hello I'm Jane Dupont.I'm 15 years old. I like pop music and often go out with my friends. I live with my parents and my twin sister. I like reading cookbooks and make them such good recipes. I am quite calm, patient, and friendly but I am quite messy. I like to put color in my pastry and cook a lot of chocolate cakes. My favorite recipes are is cookies. It is composed made up of hazelnut butter and chocolate. It’s really a real delight/It is really delightful. I love them but I do not like too sweet cakes. I will be really happy to participate in the competition for the best pastrycook/confectioner.
roby67 Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 26 octobre 2015 bonsoir est ce que cette phrase est juste ? < Oui, juste l'adverbe de manière qui se place AVANT le verbe. merci pour votre aide I would really like really to participate in the competition for the best pastrycook.
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