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[Boris90600]

Bonjour !

Pouvez vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait merci beaucoup.

In the field of electrical engineering I like programming. Particularly in robotics, in order to create small robots that can perform intelligent spots and ease the lives of human beings. Such as mowing the lawn, cleaning, or monitor the buildings. I also like this branch intelligent home programming that improves the lives of people who live in several ways. First of all it is convenient for example, have the shutters of her house that opens earlier that wishes or schedule of appliance. And it also decreases the costs with the heating which it automatically controls or lights that suits their powers according to the external brightness. Or for the protection of persons with cameras and alarms. All this while being at home or remotely controlled with a smartphone. The programming objects will expand more and more in our daily lives as we can now see with the car without drivers, who are set to make the trips well ask while respecting road safety rules. Or on the health of people registering more data on eg heart rate or rhythm of their sleep. Chris Dancy is an American to understand that the scope of new technologies and has become as of today the most connect with the world man, he possesses zoo sensor that follows him throughout these days as the media body made to analyze physical activity during the day or the google ice to analyze its environment then all these transmisse his information to his smartphone. Further programming is also used in many large plants to operate the machines in the best possible way. and thus improve business performance. these systems provide automation solutions to the test of time, capable of meeting the demands of increasingly finicky for factories and machinery. Designed to meet the needs of all industry sectors in a variety of tasks.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

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Bonne continuation.