Correction d'un texte pour passer à l'oral

[Lyova]

Bonjour,

J'ai un devoir a à faire. Je dois parler a à l'oral pendant 2-3min en parlant de l'actu : 

                                                            - politique 

                                                            -économique

                                                            -international

Voici ce que j'ai préparé.

POLITIQUE : 

The last Friday former President Nicolas Sarkozy signed his return to politics by a message on his Facebook wall, "I am running for president of my political family" .He is a candidate to the presidency of the UMP end of November.

Does he strike a bell ? Oh yes ! 2007-2012, 5 years of happiness when he was president.

So Nikolas Sarkozy is back, and this return is highly publicized. He will give a long interview on france 2 soon.

The former President is already positioned for the 2017 presidential campaign for, why not, make his second mandate.

ECONOMIQUE :

France is returned last winter the first world destination for skiing despite a 2.7% fall in attendance traffic stations, which are ahead by a nose the United States, announced ski areas of France Tuesday. The ski slopes of massive hexagonal recorded 53.9 million skier-days during the 2014 to 2015 season, 2.7% less than during the previous winter.

This performance-cons will not prevent France to pass the United States, who have had attendance even sharper decline (- 5.2%), with 53.6 million skier days last winter. The US stations have particularly suffered an historic deficit snow in western countries, where attendance has never been as low since the 70. Austria is in third place with 51.8 million skier-days.

The recipe is 1.3millions euros, a good point for the French economy.

INTERNATIONAL :

Francois Hollande and King Mohammed VI have reconciled during a two-day visit of the French president in Tangier, drawing a line on the quarrel between Paris and Rabat.

Hollande spent two days in Morocco during which he multiplied with the Moroccan king the signs of friendship and closeness. The difficulties between the two countries "are not only erased overcome, but mostly outdated" Hollande said on Sunday, ahead of the French community. Hollande also assured to have "open" with Mohammed VI, "a new stage" of the Franco-Moroccan partnership.

Morocco is a great ally in terms of security, politic and economy. "We have cooperation that has never stopped" and "nothing can alter it," said Francois Hollande, citing security. Because, he said, the two countries are "facing the same challenges" in the fight against terrorism, especially jihadist Islamic State group.

 

Pouvez-vous m'aidezr a à corriger les textes s'il vous plait? Merci infiniment !

 

 

 

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

POLITIQUE : 

The Last Friday former President Nicolas Sarkozy signed his return to politics by a message on his Facebook wall, "I am running for president of my political family". He is a candidate to the presidency of the UMP at the end of November.

Does he strike a bell? Oh yes! 2007-2012, 5 years of happiness when he was president.

So Nikolas Sarkozy is back, and this return is highly publicized. He will give a long interview on France 2 soon.

The former President is already positioned for the 2017 presidential campaign for, why not, make in order to be re-elected/have his second mandate renewed, why not?

ECONOMIQUE :

France is returned became again last winter the first world destination for skiing despite a 2.7% fall in traffic stations attendance, which are ahead by a nose of the United States, announced ski areas of France Tuesday. The ski slopes of massive hexagonal the Hexagon's/France's massifs recorded 53.9 million skier-days during the 2014 to 2015 season, 2.7% less than during the previous winter.

This poor performance-cons will not prevent France to surpass/outmatch the United States who have had an even sharper decline attendance(- 5.2%), with 53.6 million skier days last winter. The US stations have particularly suffered an historic deficit snow in western countries where attendance has never been as low since the 70's. Austria is in ranks third place with 51.8 million skier-days.

The recipe is takings are 1.3millions euros, a good point for the French economy.

* Apprends à te servir du dictionnaire intelligemment en ne t'arrêtant pas automatiquement à la première acception proposée. Utilise aussi linguee pour avoir un plus large éventail de solutions et t'efforcer de trouver le mot juste.

Exemple : les recettes dont il est question ci-dessus ne sont pas celles de la cuisine !

INTERNATIONAL :

Francois Hollande and King Mohammed VI have reconciled during a two-day visit of the French president in Tangiers, drawing a line on the quarrel between Paris and Rabat.

Hollande spent two days in Morocco during which he multiplied with the Moroccan king the signs of friendship and closeness. The difficulties between the two countries "are not only erased/overcome but mostly outdated" Hollande said on Sunday ahead in front of the French community. Hollande also assured to have "opened" with Mohammed VI, "a new stage" of the Franco-Moroccan partnership.

Morocco is a great ally in terms of security, politics and economy. "We have cooperation that has never stopped" and "nothing can alter it," said Francois Hollande, quoting/citing security. Because, he said, the two countries are "facing the same challenges" in the fight against terrorism, especially jihadist Islamic State group.

 

Pouvez-vous m'aidezr a à corriger les textes s'il vous plait? Merci infiniment !

[Lyova]

Merci beaucoup JRB, encore une fois, pour ton aide ! 

[Jean B]

My pleasure!