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-          Captain America was chosen for the cover of a comics magazine, which was published 1 year after the terrorist attacks that took place on september 11th 2001. This cover wants to pay a tribute to the victims. Captain America is a superheros, he symbolizes the USA ;

Fisrtly, he embodies the hope for everybodies americans . It has different values, indeed he represents the patriotism because he’s giving the military salute and he bears the colors of the US flag. He embodies the strength because he’s muscled and he’s holding a shiels a symbol of a protection.

 

-          For me Captain america is a real heroe, emblems of the USA, it allow us to think that there will always someone to save us.

We find out growimp up, we love her. He remains a model of courage for us all ;

But we must not forget the real life, superheroes dreaming while the heroes ordinary sobering in human terms. During the tragedy , of (for ?)  men and women they astonished the world for acts of bravery yet they never have super power.

 

-          This picture featuring spiderman bearing a firemen injured, in the background the twins towers are destroyed ; This picture shows us one heroe de fiction sad bearing the real heroe. The mightiest of heroes are firemen, policeman, rescue workers . the superheroe alive in our consciousness. The population can more easily identify with firemen’s than a superhero is living another planet

 

[Jean B]

Au minimum, on commence toujours par dire "Bonjour" ! 

   Captain America was chosen for the front cover of a comics magazine which was published 1 year after the terrorist attacks that took place on september 11th 2001. This cover wants is meant to pay a tribute to the victims. Captain America is a superheros, he symbolizes the USA.

* Attribuer une "volonté" à une première de couverture est pour le moins maladroit.

Fisrtly, he embodies the hope for everybodies all Americans. It He has different various values, indeed he represents the patriotism because he’s giving the military salute and he bears the colors of the US flag. He embodies the strength because he’s muscled muscular and he’s holding a shield, a symbol of a protection.

* all + nom pluriel ou bien every + nom singulier // everybody + nom singulier = tout le monde/chacun 

* Majuscule aux noms de nationalités.

* Revois les règles d'emploi/omission de "the", c'est essentiel.

        For To me Captain America is a real heroe, emblems of the USA, it he allows us to think that there will always be someone to save us.

We find out growimp up, we love her.<C'est censé vouloir dire quelque chose ? He remains a model of courage for to us all.

* À mon goût, ton Captain America change trop souvent de sexe...! Relis-toi.

But we must not forget the real life, superheroes dreaming while the heroes ordinary heroes sobering in human terms.<Qu'as-tu voulu dire par cette phrase ? J'ai beau la lire et la relire, elle me reste incompréhensible. During the tragedy , of (for ?)  in the course of which thousands of men and women died they astonished the world for with acts of bravery yet they never have super powers.

* L'adjectif épithète AVANT le nom.

-          This picture featuring features Spiderman carrying/bearing an injured fireman injured, in the background the twins towers are destroyed. This picture shows us one a fictitious sad heroe de fiction sad carrying/bearing the a real heroe. The mightiest of all heroes are firemen, policemen, rescue workers. the Superheroes are alive in/live on in/ our consciousness consciences. The population People can identify more easily with firemen’s than with a superhero who is living on another planet.

       * Attention aux pluriels irréguliers.

       * On n'ajoute un e au nom hero que dans sa forme pluriel =>> several heroes