noctali Posté(e) le 22 mai 2015 Signaler Posté(e) le 22 mai 2015 Rebonjour, Pourriez-vous me corriger ces phrases que je vais insérer dans mon débat. That would be very nice ! We can easily live without it (= meat). Soya-based products such as tofu could help us to have all the proteins we need. You will learn for sure to be more creative with your cooking because it's not possible to follow a basic recipe. You have to complete your recipe with a lot of ingredients and try different flavours. It could be interesting ! I would also like to say that humans are really despicable to eat the babies of the cattle. How can we eat a new born ? We take the life of babies for them taste. Do you realize ? Farmers should allow the animal to grow before consume them. Little calves are taken away from their mother shortly after birth. This is an absolute barbaric practice that needs to be outlawed. It's sad it's true. But unfortunately it will always be veal as long as we consume milk. The females are raised to produce milk, but the males aren’t needed so they end up as veal. Thank you!
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 22 mai 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 22 mai 2015 Coucou, Rebonjour, Pourriez-vous me corriger ces phrases que je vais insérer dans mon débat. That would be very nice ! We can easily live without it (= meat). Soya-based products such as tofu could help us to get/have all the proteins we need. You will learn for sure to be more creative with your cooking because it's not possible to follow a basic recipe. You have to complete your recipe with a lot of ingredients and try different flavours. It could be interesting! I would also like to say that humans are really despicable to eat for eating the babies of the cattle's calves. << cattle ce sont les bovins dont les petits s'appellent les veaux ! How can we eat a new born? We take the lives of babies for them their taste. << Contrairement au français, un complément commun à plusieurs sujets prend le pluriel. Do you realize? Farmers should allow the animals to grow fully before consuming them.<< v-ing obligatoire après une préposition Little calves are taken away from their mothers shortly after birth. << pluriel, voir plus haut This is an absolute barbaric practice that needs to be outlawed. It's truly sad it's true. << L'adverbe permet d'éviter la répétition de it's, peu naturelle But unfortunately it there will always be veal as long as we consume milk. The Females/Heifers are raised to become cows to produce milk but the males aren’t needed so they end up as veal. <<If I may interfere, what about reproduction? Aren't males/bulls ever needed one way or another? Thank you!
noctali Posté(e) le 22 mai 2015 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 22 mai 2015 Merci BEAUCOUP JRB !!!!! Encore une fois c'est super gentil d'avoir pris le temps de m'aider. Ah ! ce "the". Chaque fois je relis les règles et je pense que j'ai compris et en fin de compte c'est toujours l'inverse. Je devrais peut-être mettre l'inverse de ce que je crois. Mince...... En tout cas merci de tout coeur, car sans vous ça aurait été catastrophique. Je vous souhaite une très bonne soirée !
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