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SPACES AND EXCHANGES

I will talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges. Firstly I would like to give a definition of exchange. Nowadays different spaces of the world are more and more connected to each other. The exchanges can appear on many forms: people, trade, information. The gap year is linked to this notion as it implies the motion of travel abroad and exchange of different cultures We will focus on the question what can we do after was graduate. Firstly I will talk about the advantages and the drawbacks of an experience abroad then I will talk about my future experience abroad.

The advantages and drawbacks of an experience abroad

The benefits of an experience abroad are many, for example this experience allows to grow up quickly be independent and fend for herself. It would give the opportunity to open your mind, to be open-minded, to discover news cultures, gain in confidence and break your daily routine. It allows too improving your skills in language and many others.

The drawbacks of this experience can be to leave your family for a long period; you don’t know anybody so you can feel lonely and homesick.  The situation financial can be very difficult when you are a student. You can encounter problem with the health care system because it’s very expensive to heal you unlike France which the healthcare system is free. You can encounter problem of integration, you don’t like the country or you can’t adapt to the style life of this country and language barriers can be a big problem.

2. Future experience abroad

After will be graduate I would like to take a year out for reflect to what to do with my life so I will go to Brazil to help poor children in favelas to learn writing and reading and many other things. I would like bring them affection and make them happy. I expect this experience will be benefits for them like for me.

Conclusion:This experience allows us to improve our skills, discover a lot of news things and  allows to make yourself stand aus on the job market. This experience can bring us many benefits but can bring disadvantage too.

IDEAS OF PROGRESS

I will talk about the motion ideas of profress. The motion determine progress and ideas that will improve the future.First of all I would like to give a definition of this notion: The idea of progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change like a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place.During many years, research and experiences of many scientists has result in technology advances. However, sometimes progress causes more problems than it solves . I'm going to speak about the new technologie and new means of communication.

Have New technologie only avantages in you life ? On the one hand I will talk about utilites of new technologie, on the other hand i speak about limits of new technologie .

1) Utilites

New technologie are many avantages for us today. Before, for speak, we used letters, homing pigeon, tottle in the sea and telegram. Today , we using all phone ( sms, call), email, social media (facebook, twitter,instagram),chat online(skype) which are much faster and practice. We can speak in real time, speak with people who life far and ever see him. Keep in touch fastly with cell phone and with internet we can find help for homework, folows the new quicly and shop online.

2) Limits

But new technologie to consist risk such as the lack human contact, become addicted to screens loose money in games, meet badly intentionel people particulary for children, loose of privacy on i will and isolate themselves at home. no social life

To conclude the new technologie have many advantages they are hight utilites to communicate and research but new technologie consist too risk. To my mind, New technologie are very great us but i'm not addicted because for me, the human contact is very important.

PLACES AND FORMS OF POWER

I will talk about the motion spaces and forms of power. Firstly I would like to give a definition of power. The power is a strenght or force exerted or capable of being exerted , power is synonym of might. It can be exerted by justice, the medias,radios, and publicity .

The consumer society is a society in which people often buy new goods, especially goods that they don't especially want goods that they do not meed and which a high value is placed on owning many things.

We will focus on the fallowing question: What is the importance of image in society?

Firstly I will talk about the image of a person in the consummer society and i will speak about the image of a brand in the consumer society.

1) The image of a person in consumer society

In the world today people do not have much personality. They want to look like a supermodel and stars. People are buying any new product that are fashionable, product for slimming ( to do make a diet), proteins to makes muscles...

People are buying a lot of things they do not utilise, just to have a good image and be trendy. People make credits to buy what they want.

To be perfect they make cosmetic surgery. People want to be perfect, stand out from others.

Magazines contribute to recult of body and beauty. The picture are modified in a way that the model oppear the thirest possible with the help of software like photoshop.

2)the image of brand in the consumer society

In society people consume a lot because there are a lot of publicity. Companies have different ways to sell their brands: radios, advertising, news papera, televison, on websites, social network...

All advertissement attract customers to spend their monies. It s a big marketing project because people consume much. Companies make promotions and sells so that people buy their products and are spending their monies.

Brands use advertisers to encourage the purchasse, they great to lure consumers. Brands are used to identify with a group. For example: Adidas, Nike Air Jordan Gucci ... Brands contribute to consumer society.

Conclude : Nowadays the image it s a things very important in our society, people are like simple puppets and buy what is fashionable or up to date.

Today in the society people give a lot of importance about beauty, apparence, product...

Companies encourages people to consume through advertising.

In my opinion , people are influenced by advertissement . They don't have personality and they spend money an things that they don't need.