Correction Dune Lettre Svp

[elodie67]

Je suis en seconde etJe dois rédiger une lettre de rupture avec des mots de liaison. Voici ce que j’ai fait. Pouvez vous .indiquer mes erreurs s'il vous plaît, merci.

" Dear Max,

When you read this lettre, I Would be long gone.

First of all,I wanted tout apologize for this letter because I haven’t had the courage to tell you something in front so I prefer to write you.

Thanks to you, I had a beautiful love story.

Alghough, I appréciate you, I realize later That it was not of love but just tenderness and I don’t want to pretend.I don’t want to Hurt you.

Max, I Know it’s hard but I don’t love you and I prefered to stop everything. Since When? Why? I don’t know, but now, I’m sure, I want not to see you.

As soon as, you read this letter I don’t want you to Call me. You must forget me to meet another person. I have always been honest with you and Thanks to you I got new wife and I regret nothing of our past but now I want to regain my freedom. I don’t want to break your heart contrary to what you have to think. I loved you but you don’t have a man I want to marry.

I hope That you Will find à woman Who Will make you happy in spite of what I’m doing to you but I’m writing to your. I’m unable to hell to your face.

despite everything, be happy in your new life and I’m sorry.

however, I hope someday you Will forgive me.

Merci porte aide.

[elodie67]

SVP aidez moi

[elodie67]

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