Correction D'une Lettre

[FarahBrz]

Bonsoir, alors j'ai un devoir maison à rendre pour demain matin ( je m'y prend à la dernière minute et je le regrette toujours) 

L'idée était d'écrire une lettre j'ai finis mais j'aimerais bien savoir si j'ai beaucoup ou pas de fautes et ou. Merci beaucoup 

 

Salim,

As you know Im pregnant, its difficult for my familly and I to accept the situation. Shame on me, my mother would like you to help us financially to, I'm a Dalit, I come from the lowest class and we can't affrod to bring up the child(nous avons pas les moyens d'élever l'enfant). You know my mother wokerd for you'r familly but they fired (virer) her so we'r now even more annoyed. If she diidn't had fired, we probably have a better situation (si ils ne l'avaient pas viré, on auraient sûrement une meilleure situation).

 

I would like our soon to have a goo education, like a normal kid, with his father but we can't be married, it's a shame and people are goind to throw us out of the village. 

I'm desesperate, my mother think about an abortement. I feel alone in this situation, I don't do this child alone. If you love me, you will have you'r responsabilities and assume the consequences other than fleeing. ( I tu m'aime, tu assumerais tes responsabilités et assumerais les consequences autrement qu'en fuyant).

 

In this letter I asked you for help, repond me asap please. Dhowli

 

voilà Merci encore pour l'aide