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[psychedelicc]

Bonjour, j'ai juste besoin que l'on me corrige si j'ai faist des fautes.

I chose Karl Howell Behr as survivor, he was born on May 30th, 1885, to Brodelyn in New York, he is American. Karl was a well known tennis star, playing on the United States Davis Cup team in 1907. It is also the vice-president of Dillon, Read & Co, this is a bank. He boarded the Titanic as a first class passenger, his ticket cost him 30£. Karl and Miss Newson were married after disaster, and the couple had four children: Karl Howell Behr Junior, Peter Behr, and James Behr, then a girl, Sally Behr. He formed a commitee to honour the bravery of captain Rostron and his crew. He died on 15 october 1943 in New Jersey.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

I have chosen Karl Howell Behr as a survivor of the sinking of the Titanic.<Sinon on doit deviner à quoi il a survécu. Nouvelle phrase> He was born on May 30th, 1885, to in Brooklyn (New York). Nouvelle phrase> He is was American.<Il est mort en 1949 ! Karl was a well known tennis star, playing on in the United States Davis Cup team in 1907. It He is was also the vice-president of Dillon, Read & Co this is a bank.<En troisième, tu ne peux pas ignorer qu'il y a 3 pronoms sujet de la 3ème personne du singulier. Sinon, révise tes bases. He boarded the Titanic as a first class passenger, his ticket cost him 30£. Karl and Miss Newson were married after the disaster and the couple had four children: Karl Howell Behr Junior, Peter Behr, and James Behr, then a girl, Sally Behr. He formed a commitee to honour the bravery of captain Rostron and his crew. He died on 15 october 1949 in New Jersey.<Vérifie tes sources.

NB Tant en anglais qu'en français, on n'écrit pas "au kilomètre". Apprends à utiliser les mots de liaison pour articuler tes phrases correctement.

Bonne continuation.

[psychedelicc]

Merci, mais vous êtes pas obligé de me prendre de haut. Et je ne suis pas en troisième.

[Jean B]

Merci, mais vous êtes pas obligé de me prendre de haut. Et je ne suis pas en troisième.