Correction De Texte

[CassieBize]

Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'une correction de texte svp, si quelqu'un n'a pas peur de corriger mes nombreuses lacunes en anglais ^^ merci

Over the years, our company has made progress to be more tolerant than in the past.

Obviously our society is more tolerant there 100 years since, on the situation of women, as we can notice the status of women has changed and has become more acceptable, they now have the right to vote and have their much place in the world of work, which was not the case 100 years ago, to stay at home as housewife. But on on-there is still room for improvement. Indeed, sexism is still present, some women can not do certain jobs are considered men's work. Some women want to be equal to men being brave and courageous, but there is still a difference in the compensation they receive.

On the poor, there were 100 charity to collect a while operator, while maintaining the charity to the poor is to give him a room on the street, however there are still some popular soups offering them a meal.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'une correction de texte svp, si quelqu'un n'a pas peur de corriger mes nombreuses lacunes en anglais ^^ merci

Over the years, our company has made progress to be more tolerant than in the past.

Obviously our society is more tolerant there 100 years since, than a hundred years ago on the situation of women. Nouvelle phrase> As can be noticed the status of women has changed and has become more acceptable. Nouvelle phrase> They now have the right to vote and have their much place in the world of work, which was not the case 100 years ago when they used to stay at home as housewives. But on on- there is still room for improvement. Indeed, sexism is still present, some women cannot do certain jobs which are considered men's work. Some women want to be equal to men being brave and courageous, but there is still a difference in the compensation they receive.

On the poor, there were 100 charity to collect a while operator, while maintaining the charity to the poor is to give him a room on the street, <??? C'est incompréhensible However there are still some popular soups soup kitchens offering them a meal.

NB Aussi bien en anglais qu'en français, on n'écrit pas "au kilomètre". Médite les fameux vers de Boileau dans son Art poétique :

"Ce qui se conçoit bien s'énonce clairement

Et les mots pour le dire viennent aisément."

PS Je n'oublie pas ton S.O.S. précédent; j'y répondrai quand j'aurai plus de temps.

[CassieBize]

Merci beaucoup!

Et merci de penser à ma première demande, j'attendrais<c'est un futur, pas un conditionnel votre aide encore merci