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[aliju]

Bonjour, je devais rédiger un texte en anglais à partir de la question suivante: What does the US enjoy killing people so much?

Je l'ai déjà écrit et j'ai déjà vérifié mes fautes mais je suis sûre qu'il en reste encore donc si vous pouviez me les corriger ou juste me les montrer pour que je puisse les corriger ensuite, ce serait gentil ! Merci d'avance

I can't say the USA loves killing people. It's a lie. But, if I say they are innocent, it's wrong too.

In fact, since they became the powerful country, they feel they are like the kings of the world.

That's why, they make all what they want, when they want, where they want. For example, if they want to declare war, they do, even if this war kill a lot of people. The most important is to protect their country and to be safe. They use propaganda "America is the leader of the free world and has the duty of defending it.". But, if they were really invincible, they would not kill and would not create many conflicts in the world. As everybody, they have a fear: they are afraid of terrorism and communism

I'm not talking only about Government but people generally. American people have a gun, a knife or just a weapon because they need it, otherwise they're feeling vulnerable. They are paranoid especially because of the september 11 of 2001. It's a biggest traumatism for the population and since this day, something changed. Thus, they are more violent, more brutal, more hostile than before. American people think they are better than the rest because they are sure they hold the truth and their constitution and their laws are the best. In fact, I'm talking about capital punishment. They have a different conception of the death. For example, a serial killer is not a human, is a monster or an extraterrestrial who doesn't deserve to live anymore. Normally, we can't decide if someone has to live or not but if USA judge is a dangerous person, they have to act and have all the rights.

[aliju]

J'ai rajouté une petite conclusion

To conclude in two sentences, I would say that the USA is trapped in a vicious circle. They are the strongest but they are also the most hated. They have to be ruthless and show they are not afraid of anything, even if they are killed. The most important thing for them is to protect themselves and maintain peace.