Segregation

[mimi4521]

Bonsoir, j'ai un dm d'anglais, et je vous demende s'il vous plaît de me corriger les fautes. Merci.

Question :

On your own: write a short article about this particular event or people (about

200 words).

We can see in the photo two woman : one on the left is Elizabeth Eckford and on the right is Massery Hazel, a former with segregasionist. Elizabeth is one of the nine of Little Rock crisis. Septembe 4, 1957 Elizabeth aged 16 years old with eight others black students tied to bring in the Lilltle Rock High School, reserved to whith students. The entry of the high school was blocked to black students by the national army, and the black students were obliged to come back to their home. But the president Eisenhower, gave order to army to let black people to got to school. September 25, 1957 Elizabeth were welcomed by the army and every students black had a body guard to watched them. The studens were offended, harassed, struck, pushap, slapped, theatened by the white students. But this students stayed courage, brave, determined until obtain their diploma.

Today, they are 65 % black students in the school of Arkansas. This photographie commemorate the 40e birthday of 1957 and in this day they are the opening of the central high museum. The two woan hand gets ( se sert la main) and we can think is a gesture of peace between black and white american I think this show the american society evolution between the past and today

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonsoir, j'ai un dm d'anglais, et je vous demande s'il vous plaît de me corriger les fautes. Merci.

Question :

On your own: write a short article about this particular event or people (about

200 words).

In the photo we can see two women : - Le COD doit suivre immédiatement le verbe. Donc le complément de lieu se place soit avant, soit après mais pas entre les deux.

- one woman >>> two women, c'est un pluriel irrégulier que tu as appris en sixième. one on the left is Elizabeth Eckford and on the right there is Massery Hazel, a former with segregasionist. Elizabeth is one of the Little Rock Nine integration crisis. September 4, 1957 Elizabeth aged 16 years old with eight others black students tried to bring in the attend classes at Lilltle Rock High School, reserved to for white students. The entry of the high school was blocked to black students by the Arkansas National army, Guard and the black students were obliged to come go back to their homes. <Il faut veiller à rester fidèle aux sources sans les déformer. But the president Eisenhower gave order to army ordered the Guard to let black people to got go to school. <Comment peux-tu encore confondre go et got ? September 25, 1957 Elizabeth were was welcomed by the army and every black students black had a body guard to watched them. - À sujet singulier, verbe singulier

- L'adjectif DEVANT le nom

- to + infinitif, là tu t'es surpassée The Black students were offended, harassed, struck, pushed, slapped, threatened by the white students. But this students the former stayed remained courageous, brave, determined until obtain they got their diplomas.

Today, they there are 65 % black students in the schools of Arkansas. This photography commemorates the 40th birthday anniversary of 1957 and in this day they are the opening of the central high museum. -s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est au singulier. The two women hand gets ( se sert la main) are shaking hands and so we can think it is a gesture of peace between black and white Americans. I think this shows < Bis ! the American society evolution between the past and today.

[mimi4521]

Merci, je sais, je fais beacoup de fautes, mais c'est aussi parceque je ne m'étais pas relue et que j'étais fatiguée.

[Jean B]

Merci, je sais, je fais beaucoup de fautes, mais c'est aussi parce que je ne m'étais pas relue et que j'étais fatiguée.