Corriger Une Lettre De Motivation

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Salut tous le monde,

Voilà, l'année prochaine j'aimerai faire la section européene mathematiques et pour ça je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais, ce que j'ai fait, et j'aimerai bien qu'on me corrige.

La voilà :

Dear Sir,

I wish join the European section of the high school ***************.

Curious by nature, I am involved in my work. So at European section I wish strengthen my knowledge and my competences at English but also my learn about mathematics.

I do two years at “European section” and two years at “Specialty languages”, so now I am interested to continue the European section in the high school of *********************, hence this cover letter.

Calculate, resonate, I love mathematics for their level of difficulty which is allowing to challenge me. Since I was little, I was very interested by these “enigmas”, and now I always love mathematics. The mathematics European section maybe could be a real support for me with a strengthening of calculation’s method. English is an excellent basis for my future professional life.

I perfectly know that English is essential for communication cause it is an international language. Thus, European Section can open my mind to the world.

Waiting for your answer, hoping favorable.

Best Regards

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[Jean B]

Salut tous le monde,

Voilà, l'année prochaine j'aimerai faire la section européene mathematiques et pour ça je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais, ce que j'ai fait, et j'aimerai bien qu'on me corrige.

La voilà :

Dear Sir,

I wish join the European section of the high school ***************.

Curious by nature, I am involved in my work. So at European section I wish strengthen my knowledge and my competences at English but also my learn about mathematics.

I do two years at “European section” and two years at “Specialty languages”, so now I am interested to continue the European section in the high school of *********************, hence this cover letter.

Calculate, resonate, I love mathematics for their level of difficulty which is allowing to challenge me. Since I was little, I was very interested by these “enigmas”, and now I always love mathematics. The mathematics European section maybe could be a real support for me with a strengthening of calculation’s method. English is an excellent basis for my future professional life.

I perfectly know that English is essential for communication cause it is an international language. Thus, European Section can open my mind to the world.

Waiting for your answer, hoping favorable.

Best Regards

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