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[Laura007]

Bonjour j'aimerais de l'aide pour corrigé ces erreur entre parenthèse .Merci a vous.

The attacks of September eleventh two thousand and one are four attacks cause the same day in the United States.

By members of the of the Islamist network Al-Qaïda, aimed at (building symbolic).

On the morning of Tuesday, September eleventh, two thousand and one, several terrorist (divert) four airliners.

The North tower of the World Trade Center (is) hit by the first aircraft.

All the passengers on board and employees present are died.

The aircraft fuel (ha)s caused hude fire.

The persons in the upper floors are stuck.

The stairs of the building (become impassable).

Trapped by the explosion, without help they (jump) into the void.

The south tower of the WTC (is) in turn hit by an airliner.

(More no doubt,) it is not an accident.

It is a double attack.

A third aircraft hit the pentagon.

The passengers and crew in the buildings were killed.

The south tower of the WTC collapsed.

The one hundred and ten floors invade streets.

Then it (is) the turn of the North tower of the WTC to collapse.

The images of chaos pass all over the world.

The president Bush (contacts) the nation (since) the White House.

He (says): ["These acts of mass murder were intended to frighten our nation into chaos and retreat, but they have failed."] George W. Bush (directs) a meeting with the national Council of security.

(In finish), the USA suffered from the worst murder attacks making 2 973 victims.

The Pictures of the building in fire (does) the world tour.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Aider ne signifie pas faire. Or j'ai la nette impression que, volontairement ou involontairement, tu ne fais aucune différence entre ces deux verbes.

Par contre, si tu condescends à produire un début de correction de ce texte vraiment bizarre, j'envisagerai de te donner un coup de pouce.

Pour ce faire, il serait préférable que tu donnes un énoncé clair et sans ambiguïté.