Correction D'un Travail

[alicedegivet]

Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger un texte d'anglais ? S'il vous plait. Il s'agit dans ce récit d'employer les deux aspects du prétérit. (simple et en be plus ing)

Je tiens à dire que j'ai beaucoup de mal en conjugaison anglaise. Je vous remercie

Last Sunday, after a heavy lunch Mr. Mclean decided to have a nap. He had a new armchair. So, he was going into the sitting room. This new armchair possessed a handle at the side to control the angle of the back, and to raise a flap to rest his feet. It was very modern!! Mr. McLean had a small dog. Perhaps, that was a Chihuahua? This dog called Tigger. This young dog was wanting go out for a walk. It was taking a lead in mouth and was shaking it in front of Mr. Mclean. Mr.McLean sat on an armchair and pulled back the handle. Mr. McLean was sleeping.

Tigger was watching his sleepy master. The dog was jumping around to attract attention but it was no use!!

Mr. McLean fell asleep. While his master was sleeping, Tigger had an idea.

Tigger pushed hard on the handle with his front paws. It’s sure, it wasn’t a Chihuahua! The back of the chair shot forward! And Mr McLean woke up. He found himself flying through the air! “It will teach him a lesson!” Tigger thought.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Last Sunday, after a heavy lunch Mr. Mclean decided to have a nap. He had a new armchair. So, he was going went / walked into the sitting room. This new armchair possessed had a handle at the side to control the angle of the back, and to raise a flap to rest his feet. It was very modern!! Mr. McLean had a small dog. Perhaps, that was a Chihuahua? This dog was called Tigger. This young dog was wanting wanted to go out for a walk. It was taking took a lead in its mouth and was shaking shook it in front of Mr. Mclean. Mr.McLean sat on an his armchair and pulled back the handle. Mr. McLean was sleeping.

Tigger was watching his sleepy master. The dog was jumping around to attract attention but it was no use!!

Mr. McLean fell asleep. While his master was sleeping, Tigger had an idea.

Tigger pushed hard on the handle with his front paws. It’s sure, it wasn’t a Chihuahua! The back of the chair shot forward! And Mr McLean woke up. He found himself flying through the air! “It will teach him a lesson!” Tigger thought.

Tu sembles avoir compris l'essentiel des 2 aspects du prétérit.

Bonne continuation.