Expression Écrite

[dreamthelife]

Je devais écrire un article sur l’Angleterre avec comme 1er paragraphe les monuments, 2eme paragraphe les stéréotypes, 3ème paragraphe henry 8 et les institutions et en fin comme dernier paragraphe la nourriture. J'aimerais beaucoup que vous me corrigiez mon texte, je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes dedans...

Hi everybody! My name is Iona and I passed two weeks in England with the TV program.

• First, I visited the tower bridge which is the oldest touristic attraction in England and the legends say if the crows left the tower so the tower collapse.

Then, I went Shakespeare’s house in Stratford upon Avon

Finally, I visited central business district in England where there are a lot of skyscrapers.

• French people have a lot of stereotypes about the English as :

They are said shy, cold and unfriendly; they are called roast beef; The English love tea; the English don’t hurt your feeling; their favorites sports it’s the cricket and the fair-play. There are a lot of stereotypes about their but some stereotypes are false. The English aren’t hypocritical and cold.

• Henry the 8^th was born in 1491 in Greenwich Palace, He was a king of England. Henry had an old brother and two sisters. Henry speaks four languages: Latin, French, Spanish and Greek. Henry wore a dagger which represents the power. He had six wives: the first wife is Katherine of Aragon they divorced, the second was executed, the third was died, with the fourth they divorced, the fifth was executed and the last survived.

Now In England the queen, Elizabeth II who lives in Buckingham palace reigns but doesn’t rule. Parliament is the most important authority in Britain. In England there are three powers: legislative, executive with the prime minister who live at 10 Downing Street and judicial.

• During my two weeks I had the chance to eat different dish typical of England

The first dish it’s a fast food, it’s savoury and there are fish, chips, and mashed peas. You guessed it I talk about fish and chips!

The second dish it’s the cream tea with scones, jam, and, tea, batter it’s sweet and scrumptious. It’s a tea time

And the third dish it’s the breakfast with fried eggs, tomatoes, slices of bacon and sausages it’s a copious breakfast because for the English it’s the most important dinner in the day

I hope that my article was interesting and now you want to go in England.

[dreamthelife]

je viens de voir la faute et je parlais de tower of london non de tower brigde --'

[Damselfish]

Bonsoir!

Hi everybody! My name is Iona and I passed spent two weeks in England with the TV program.

• First, I visited the tower bridge, which is the oldest touristic attraction in England. the Legends say that if the crows left leave the tower, so the tower will collapse.

Then, I went Shakespeare’s house in Stratford upon Avon.

Finally, I visited the central business district in England where there are a lot of skyscrapers.

• French people have a lot of stereotypes about the English as :

They are said to be shy, cold and unfriendly; they are called roast beef; The English love tea; the English don’t hurt your feelings; their favorites sports it’s the is cricket; and they value fair play. There are a lot of stereotypes about their them but some stereotypes are false. The English aren’t hypocritical and cold.

• Henry the 8^th was born in 1491 in Greenwich Palace. He was a king of England, and he had an old brother and two sisters. Henry speaks spoke four languages: Latin, French, Spanish and Greek. Henry (he) wore a dagger which represented the his power. He had six wives: the first, Katherine of Aragon, they was divorced, the second was executed, the third was died, with the fourth they was divorced, the fifth was executed and the last survived.

Now Today in England, the queen, Elizabeth II, who lives in Buckingham palace, reigns but doesn’t rule. Parliament is the most important authority in Britain. In England there are three powers: legislative, executive with the prime minister who lives at 10 Downing Street, and judicial.

• During my two weeks I had the chance to eat different dishes typical of England.

The first dish was a fast food. It was savoury and there were fish, chips, and mashed peas. You guessed it: I talk about fish and chips!

The second dish was the cream tea with scones, jam, and, tea. batter (?) It was sweet and scrumptious. It’s a tea time!

And the third dish was the breakfast with fried eggs, tomatoes, slices of bacon and sausages. It was a copious breakfast, because for the English, it’s the most important dinner meal in the day.

I hope that my article was interesting and makes you want to go in to England.