Synthése

[MarionC]

Bonjour ,

Je dois rédiger un synthése en anglais mais j'aurais besoin d'une correction

préalable . Merci beaucoup

The notion the idea of the progress invites us to interest us in India. In fact India is a country on the march , not only his market of buissness is attractive but the population is growing . But India is a country of traditions and customs. Why is India said to be a country of contradictions ?

Indeed , with the documents page 24 , this graph shows the sharp rise in the population of India over the last sixty years , the poupulation has increased rapidly since 1941 india's population has been multiplied 4 it has icreased from 319 million to 1,2 billion

What is striking india's population is growing faster than china's it is expected to overtake by 2030 It is estimated ta reach 1 billion 7 people in 2050

the needly are less numerous than thirty years ago and yet many indiansstill live below povertyWomen are still denied access to education

Corcern to India's economie the bar shart underline the évolution in porcentage of GDP (Gross Domestic Product : A measure of all the services and good produced in a country over a specefic period ,) the service sector is expanding whereas the agriculture and industry and steadily declinning. More and More of young people like student or young entreprise intall to India for beginning in the market of buisness .

On the other hand , India is in discrepancy because there is many people underprivileged like a women or children .

In fact with the documents page 20 , we learn that 50 millions women lost many of them children In India the women are considered like burden because women do not have enough strength to work and therefore does not make money for the family . The text in page 23 , shows this situation because the men are desapointed when he learn that his children is a girl and he wants ta abandoned her

we can say that india is a country of a contradiction between one progress and the traditions and customs

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

The notion / the idea <L'un ou l'autre, pas les deux. of the progress invites us to take an interest us in India. In fact India is a developing country / a country on the march move, not only his its business market is attractive but the population is growing. But Yet India is a country of traditions and customs. Why is India said to be a country of contradictions ?

Indeed, with the documents page 24, this graph shows the sharp rise in the population of India. Nouvelle phrase> Over the last sixty years, the population has rapidly grown. rapidly It increased fourfold since 1941 india's population has been multiplied 4 it has icreased from 319 million to 1,2 billion.

What is striking India's population is growing faster than China's which it is expected to overtake exceed by 2030. It is estimated ta it will reach 1 billion 7 people in 2050.

The needy are less numerous fewer than thirty years ago and yet many Indians still live below poverty level. Women are still denied access to education;

Concerning to India's economy the bar chart underlines the evolution in percentage of the GDP (Gross Domestic Product : A measure of all the services and good produced in a country over a specefic period ,) the service sector is expanding whereas the agriculture and industry and steadily declining. More and more of young people like students or young junior entreprises intall to set up in India for beginning in the market of to start their businesses.

On the other hand, India is in discrepancy because there is are many underprivileged people underprivileged like a women or children .

In fact with the documents page 20, we learn that 50 millions women lost many of them their children. Nouvelle phrase> In India the women are considered like a burden because women they do not have enough strength to work and therefore does not make money for their families. The text in page 23 shows this situation because the men are disappointed when he they learn that his their children is are a girl and he they want to abandoned her them.<Si tu ne sais même pas faire la différence entre singulier et pluriel, alors c'est réellement dramatique.

We can say that India is a country of a contradiction between one progress and the traditions and customs.

Au moins avec toi, on n'est pas déçu. Toutes les fautes à faire, tu les fais sans coup férir. Mais ce qui est inquiétant, c'est que la plupart dénotent une méconnaissance grave des notions les plus élémentaires.

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