Correction De Texte Svp

[Maelys1]

We speak at the moment about the environment and about our duty a lot to protect the nature. The motives which move in this direction are multiple.

At first, by defending the nature, the man defends the man: he satisfies the instinct of self-preservation of the species. No doubt that the uncountable attacks of which he is guilty to the natural environment are not without having disastrous consequences for his health and for the integrity of its heritage. Indeed, the radioactive pollution caused by the explosions of the nuclear bombs , went on the rampage at all the inhabitant's of the planet, especially the youngest, which carry in their skeleton of the atoms of radioactive metal.

Furthermore, by the excessive employment of insecticides, the milk of all the mothers contains a certain dose of the harmful DDT. To protect the nature, it is thus first of all to carry out a spot of global hygiene.

Besides, the biologists, worried about the nature for herself, do not admit that so many alive species fade of the ground fauna of flora, and that as a consequence becomes impoverished little by little, because of the man, the luxurious and fascinating museum which the planet offered to our curiosities.

Finally, the nature lovers, intend to keep her because they see an alive and invigorating decoration, a link maintained with the original plenitude, a refuge of peace and the truth there. Because we live in a world invaded by the grit and the scrap, they side with the tree against the concrete, and do not resign to see the spring becoming silent.

Finally, the protection of the environment stays an essential cause. That is why it would be necessary to encourage the associations which work in this domain and to make sensitive the young people to like and to protect the nature.

[Jean B]

De toute évidence, ce texte a été "pompé" sur le web et je ne vais donc pas me fatiguer inutilement à le corriger.

Bonne fin de dimanche.

[Maelys1]

Mais c pas un travail

je veux apprendre l'anglais

si c'etait vraiment un sujets je l'aurai jamais mis ici donc voilà

[Jean B]

Ce n'est pas en postant tel ou tel texte ici que tu vas "apprendre l'anglais".