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[xLalou]

Bonsoir !

J'ai un DM en anglais et j'aimerais si possible, une correction ^^ Il porte sur mes cours, on doit décrire une personne en son intégralité... Et j'ai choisi Bart Simpson ! :p

Merci d'avance pour votre aide et bonne soirée !!

His name is Bartholomew Jojo Simpson alias Bart Simpson. He is a fictional main character in the animated television series "The Simpsons" and is part of the Simpson family.

Bart Simpson was born in 1981 in Springfield. He is American and he lives in 742, Evergreen Terrace. His parents are Homer and Marge. They are crazy but very nice ! Bart has got two little sisters, Liza and Maggie. The Simpson family are very united, despite disputes ! They have got a dog and a cat, Petit Papa Noel and Boule de Neige II (en anglais, ça donne quoi ?).

Bart is enrolled in Springfield Elementary School. He is often cheerful but sometimes grumpy because he hate school ! He has got lots of friends and he loves to play with them, in the yard ! Bart always gets into trouble. His best friend is Milhouse Van Houten.

Bart is (has ?), like all the characters in the series, skin yellow. He has short, bristling hair. He most often wears a red t-shirt, blue short and sneackers. He is small, thin and he has got a

square face. He is sometimes accompanied by his green skate-board.

At home, Bart is very lazy ! Therefore, he rarely makes his bed after getting-up. He never tidies his room and does the washing-up ! But he sometimes sets and clears the table. He seldom takes the dustbin out and completes all his homework. Bart usually takes care of his pets, because he loves them

In short, Bart is very foxy, rebellious and he loves laugh. But beware ! Because he is

not ready.. to change.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

His name is Bartholomew Jojo Simpson alias Bart Simpson. He is a fictional main character in the animated television series "The Simpsons" and is part of the Simpson family.

Bart Simpson was born in 1981 in Springfield. He is American and he lives in at 742, Evergreen Terrace. His parents are Homer and Marge. They are crazy but very nice! Bart has got two little sisters, Liza and Maggie. The Simpson family are very united, despite disputes quarrels / arguments! They have got a dog and a cat, Petit Papa Noel and Boule de Neige II (en anglais, ça donne quoi ? Father Christmas and Snowball).

Bart is enrolled in attends / goes to / Springfield Elementary School. He is often cheerful but sometimes grumpy because he hates school! <-s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est au singulier. Mémorise-le. He has got lots of friends and he loves to play with them, in the yard! Bart always gets into trouble. His best friend is Milhouse Van Houten.

Bart is (has ?), like all the characters in the series, skin has a yellow skin / complexion. <l'adjectif DEVANT le nom He has short, bristling hair. He most often wears a red t-shirt, blue shorts and sneackers. He is small, thin and he has got a square face. He is sometimes accompanied by his green skate-board.

At home, Bart is very lazy! Therefore, he rarely makes his bed after getting-up. He never tidies his room and nor does the washing-up!<never...nor = ne...jamais... ni... But he sometimes sets and clears the table. He seldom takes the dustbin out and completes all his homework. Bart usually takes care of his pets, because he loves them

In short, Bart is very foxy, rebellious and he loves to laugh. But beware because he is not ready.. to change.

S'il est vrai que tu es en cinquième, alors j'estime que tu te débrouilles plutôt bien en anglais.

Bonne continuation.