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[charlottetag]

Bonjour à tous,

merci tout d'abord de prendre le temps pour me venir en aide, j'ai un devoir maison à faire pour demain qui consiste à créer son propre quiz sur les habitudes alimentaires : Je dois faire quelques questions pour déterminer les habitudes alimentaires, et dans ces questions donner 4 réponses possible en partant de la personne la plus saine jusqu'au pire accro à la malbouffe. Puis pour finir je dois écrire 4 conclusions qui correspondent aux réponses.

Ce que j'ai fait :

Have a well balanced diet is essential for health. Has your opinon : have you a good diet? Are you more the healthiest person or more the worst junk food addict? To know it make this quizz :

You eat more often :

- organic and home cooking

- frozen food

- tinned food and processed food

- junk food and fattening food

When you have during a day a little hungry :

- you stay fasting

- you take a snack of fruit, a cereal bar, a dairy

- you eat sweats and drink a soda to stop hunger

- you snack all the day savoury or/and sweet

Eat 5 fruits and vegetables means for you :

- your every day life

- a rule that you try to follow as you can

- a resolution

- a constraint

During the meal, on the table, fizzy drinks are :

- non-existents

- invited during special occasions

- occasionally presents

- here at every meals

You eat sweet things :

- to only the festive season

- sometimes

- when you want

- almost every time

When you eat out you :

- take a simple salad

- you taste a good meal with fish and vegeteables

- you eat a hearty meal with starter, main course, cheese, and don't forget the pudding

- you wolf down an hamburger or a hot dog

Voilà je prends toutes les critiques, et je suis à cours d'idées pour les conclusions.

Merci d'avance pour votre aide.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Having a well balanced diet is essential for to health.<Seul le gérondif (v-ing) peut prendre les fonctions du nom, donc être sujet d'un verbe. C'est à mémoriser. Has In your opinon:<Premier et dernier avis sur ce point : évite d'utiliser un traducteur automatique. Non seulement c'est un total manque de respect envers les personnes qui te lisent mais ça ne t'apportera encore aucun bénéfice linguistique. have you a good diet? Are you more rather the healthiest person or more the worst junk food addict? To know it make answer this quizz :<Efforce-toi d'employer des termes précis pour enrichir ton vocabulaire.

You eat more often :

- organic and home cooking

- frozen food

- tinned food and processed food

- junk food and fattening food

When you have during a day are / feel a little hungry during the day: <avoir faim = to be hungry Tu as intérêt à réviser ce type d'expressions, typiques de l'anglais.

- you stay fasting / have / eat nothing

- you take have a snack of fruit, a cereal bar, a dairy product prendre/consommer qqch = to have sth <---> take sth a le sens de prendre/enlever/saisir qqch, tu piges ?

- you eat sweats and drink a soda to stop hunger

- you snack all the day savoury or/and sweet

Eating < Voir 1ère ligne 5 fruits and vegetables means for to you :

- your every day life

- a rule that you try to follow as you can

- a resolution

- a constraint

During the meal, on the table, fizzy drinks are :

- non-existents <Les adjectifs sont INVARIABLES.

- invited during on special occasions

- occasionally presents IDEM !

- here at every meals <every est suivi du singulier. C'est à mémoriser.

You eat sweet things :

- to only during the festive season only

- sometimes

- when you want

- almost every time

When you eat out you :

- take have a simple salad

- you taste a good meal with fish and vegeteables

- you eat a hearty meal with starter, main course, cheese, and don't forget the pudding

- you wolf down an hamburger or a hot dog < a devant un nom commençant par un son-consonne <---> an devant un nom commençant par un son-voyelle ou "h" muet. C'est à savoir également.

Conseil : n'attends plus jamais le dernier moment pour demander de l'aide, c'est suicidaire. Au contraire, fais preuve de prévoyance et organise ton travail en conséquence.

Bonne continuation.

[charlottetag]

Merci beaucoup pour votre aide, vous n'avez pas fait que me corriger vous m'avez expliqué et pour cela je vous en suis très reconnaissante.

Et voici mes conclusions :

Profil 1 : You have a really well balanced diet, maybe a little too much. You keep an eye on what there is on your plate and you choose products carrefully. Be carrefull, your eating habits could mean some eating disorders. Eating should not be a contrainst. Sometimes you can allow yourself pleasure. Take the time for meals, eat with family or friends, and savour both the food and the company.

Profil 2 : Congratulations! Your diet is healthy and you should be proud of yourself. You eat 5 fruits and vegetables every day, you are careful about what you eat but sometimes you eat also what you want. We see eating it’s a pleasure for you and a convivial moment with family or friends. Keep up the good work, because it’s essential to your health.

Profil 3 : Your diet may be too high in fat and too low in fruits and vegetables. You should be more careful about what you eat... are you sure you're not eating too many high-fat foods? How about going to your local food market more often to buy fresh produce? You are making good choices, but are you ready for the next step? Set realistic goals that you can achieve and maintain.

Profil 4 Be careful, you don't seem to have healthy eating habits at all! You run the risk of nutritional deficiencies and health problems in the long term! Don't forget to eat a variety of foods, remember to eat fruit and vegetables. Stop fattening and junk food otherwise you will became obese. Don’t forget how vital it’s to eat balanced. You have to eat three times a week with a snack at regular intervals, not to snack all the day, plus to eat slowly, sit down and savour the food and the company. You should go see a nutritionist to change your eating habits.

[Jean B]

Profil 1 : You have a really well balanced diet, maybe a little too much.< N'est-ce pas en contradiction avec la 1ère partie de la phrase ? Qu'as-tu voulu dire exactement ? You keep an eye on what there is on your plate and you choose products carefully. Be careful, your eating habits could mean some eating disorders. Eating should not be a constraint. Sometimes you can allow yourself pleasure. Take the time for meals, eat with family or friends, and savour both the food and the company.

Profil 2 : Congratulations! Your diet is healthy and you should be proud of yourself. You eat 5 fruits and vegetables every day, you are careful about what you eat but sometimes you eat also what you want. We can see eating it’s is a pleasure for you and a convivial moment with family or friends. Keep up the good work, because it’s essential to your health.< Pas de double sujet en anglais.

Profil 3 : Your diet may be too high in fat and too low in fruits and vegetables. You should be more careful about what you eat... Are you sure you're not eating too many high-fat foods? How about going to your local food market more often to buy fresh produce? You are making good choices, but are you ready for the next step? Set realistic goals that you can achieve and maintain.

Profil 4 Be careful, you don't seem to have healthy eating habits at all! You run the risk of nutritional deficiencies and health problems in the long term! Don't forget to eat a variety of foods, remember to eat fruit and vegetables. Stop fattening and junk food otherwise you will become obese. <Relis-toi toujours afin d'éviter ce genre d'horreur et révise les verbes irréguliers. Rappel : un modal est toujours suivi de Base Verbale. Don’t forget how vital it is to eat balanced. You have to eat three times a week with a snack at regular intervals, not to snack all the day, plus to eat slowly, sit down and savour the food and the company. You should go see a nutritionist to change your eating habits.

Au risque de me tromper mais sans vouloir t'offenser, je parierais que tout ce qui précède est repiqué. C'est le cas ou pas ?

[charlottetag]

Oui je l'avoue, d'un vrai Quizz sur internet et aussi de mon cour

[Jean B]

Oui je l'avoue, d'un vrai Quizz sur internet et aussi de mon cours < Astuce mnémotechnique : le nom vient du latin cursus