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Your best friend or sister sent you a message of facebook , telling you her boyfriend has been beating her for months. Write the answer .

Shanone, i'm very shocked that you send me . I never thought it. Your boyfriend seemed to be nice.

I understand your pain. You don't merite that please don't say me that it's your fault you are gulty . You must be strong and leave him you can say at me. You are a girl with lots of qualities, your boyfriend not deserve a girl like you .

You are beautiful and young enjoy the life nobody merite a life that and you know that you are smart girl. His acts prove that he's coward . You must have felt afraid and bewildered . Your boyfriend must have felt powerful strong and invincible. Afront him and show him that you are stronger that him. I know you love him nevertheless but you must forget him. Don't spokke to him , ignore him ! Left your home and comme to live with me. I hope my advice will help you ,,,

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

bonsoir pouvez vous corriger mon sujet en anglais svp ! merci d avance

Your best friend or sister sent you a message of on facebook telling you her boyfriend has been beating her for months. Write the answer.

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Sans plus tarder, tu as intérêt à réviser sérieusement les notions de grammaire élémentaire que tu ne sais pas actuellement afin de les maîtriser d'ici à la fin de l'année scolaire. L'année prochaine en Seconde il sera trop tard.