Aide Pour Une Correction De Texte

[yaston3]

Bonjour,

J'ai besoin d'un petit coup de main pour la correction de cette lettre de motivation.

Je vous remercie d'avance pour l'aide apporté.

version en anglais :

I offer my experience of 5 years, 6 months in Berrebi Cosmetics for an assistant manager position. So you can benefit from my work experience that will enable me to be efficient in my work.

My social skills allow me to make clients feel comfortable and offer the best service. My sense of the organization, allow me to be quick and orderly in my work. I am a person who adapts to different environments, so I could quickly adapt to the company.

A graduate assistant manager, I have acquired many skills including computer since I mastery of office software such as Microsoft Office and accounting software and business management, such as the sky pack.

Strongly believes that if you hire me as an assistant manager, you will have more time and energy you focus on growing your business.

Tnhak you for your time ans consideration and I will contact your office if I do not hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Enclosure : CV

Version française :

Je vous propose mon expérience de 5 ans, dont 6 mois, au sein de Berrebi Cosmetics pour un poste d'assistante-manager. Ainsi vous pourrez bénéficier de mes expériences professionnelles qui vont me permettre d'être efficace possible dans mes tâches.

Ma sociabilité me permettra de mettre à l'aise les clients et de leur offrir le meilleur service. Mon sens de l'organisation, me permettra d'être rapide et ordonnée dans mon travail. Je suis une personne qui s'adapte a divers environnements, ainsi, je pourrais rapidement m'adapter à l'entreprise.

Titulaire d'un diplôme d'assistante de manager, j'ai acquis de nombreuses compétences notamment en informatiques puisque je maitrise des logiciels de bureautique telle que Microsoft Office et des logiciels de gestion comptable et commerciale, tel que le pack Ciel.

Convaicu que si vous m'engager comme assistante de manager, vous aurez plus de temps et d'énergie pour vous concentrez sur la croissance de votre entreprise.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

I offer my experience of 5 years, 6 months in Berrebi Cosmetics for an assistant manager position. So you can benefit from my work experience that will enable me to be efficient in my work.

Suggestion : I wish to apply for the position of assistant manager with your firm. I have a five-year long work experience, six months of which with Berrebi Cosmetics, that will enable me to be efficient in my work, so a real asset to your firm.

My social skills allow me to make clients feel comfortable and offer them the best service. My sense of the organization allows me to be quick and orderly in my work. I am a person who adapts to different environments, so I could quickly adapt to the company.

A graduate assistant manager, I have acquired many skills including office computing since I master office software programs such as Microsoft Office, just as CIEL, an accounting and business management software. (CIEL = Compagnie Internationale d'Édition de Logiciels, il ne s'agit pas du ciel qui est au dessus de nos têtes !)

Suggestion : I strongly believe that you can devote more time and energy to developing your business if you hire me as an assistant manager.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Enclosure : CV