Besoin D'aide Pour Corriger Une Présentation De Film

[Sasa07]

Bonjour à tous, alors voilà, je dois présenter un film en Anglais . Donc le film que j'ai choisi est : Fight Club .

Et j'aurais juste besoin d'aide pour savoir si il y'as des fautes, ou des phrases mal construite :x Voilà le texte :

I'm going to present you a well known movie, Fight Club. The movie Fight Club is an adaptation of the novel "fight club" written by Chuck Palahniuk in 1996. The film was released in theaters in 1999. He was directed by David Fincher and produced by Arnon Milchan. The film 's budget was 63 million dollars and it brought them more than 100 million dollars. The main actors are Edward Norton, Brad Pitt and Helena Carter.

The narrator, acted by Edward Norton, leads an ordinary life in a consumer society. He is a nameless automobile company employee. He is a chronical insomniac and tries to escape from his boring life. He assists many supports groups and thanks to that he found sleep again. The narrator’s routine is disrupted when he begins to notice another impostor, Marla Singer, at the groups he goes to and his insomnia come back. During a flight for a business trip, the narrator meets Tyler Durden, a charismatic soap salesman who has a twisted philosophy.

The narrator arrives home to find his apartment destroyed by an explosion. He calls Tyler and will move in Tyler’s house. Together they decide to create an illegal fight club whose rules put up into the world . The first rule is “you do not talk about fight club”. Nevertheless this club takes back new recruits every day. In this place, the narrator will find his virility, trade and communication.

Tyler becomes a leader preaching speech of rebellion facing the effected society and urges members of fight club to accomplish terrorist’s acts.

He creates the Chaos plan whose ambition are beyond the narrator.

Tyler vanished suddenly and the narrator goes in search of him. In this way he discovers that Tyler and him form only one people."

Merci de m'aider , j'en ai vraiment besoin :x

C'est à faire pour le 1 er octobre

[Jean B]

Bonjour et bienvenue sur le forum e-bahut.

I'm going to present to you a well known movie, Fight Club. The movie Fight Club It is an adaptation of the novel "fight club" written by Chuck Palahniuk in 1996. <le pronom "It" permet d'éviter la répétition du nom que tu as employé juste avant. The film was released in theaters in 1999. He It was directed by David Fincher and produced by Arnon Milchan. <Souviens-toi qu'il y a 3 pronoms sujet 3e personne singulier. C'est une faute qui ne pardonne pas. The film 's budget was 63 million dollars and it brought them more than 100 million dollars. <Le génitif (cas possessif) est impossible toutes les fois que le possesseur est une chose ou objet inanimé. Le seul nom composé "film budget" suffit à induire l'idée d'appartenance. The main actors are Edward Norton, Brad Pitt and Helena Carter.

The narrator, acted / performed by Edward Norton, leads an ordinary life in a consumer society. He is a nameless automobile company employee. He is a chronical insomniac and tries to escape from his boring life. He assists 1) attends many supports 2) groups and thanks to that he found 3) finds sleep again. <1) assist est un faux ami = aider - 2) Dans un nom composé de nom + nom, seul le second prend la marque du pluriel. Le premier ayant valeur d'adjectif reste au singulier. 3) assister à qqch = to attend sth et puisque tu as commencé ta présentation au présent, il faut continuer par le présent. The narrator’s routine is disrupted when he begins to notice another impostor, Marla Singer, at the groups he goes to and his insomnia comes back. <-s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est singulier. Tu l'as appris en Sixième et ça n'a pas changé depuis. During a flight for a business trip, the narrator meets Tyler Durden, a charismatic soap salesman who has a twisted philosophy.

The narrator arrives home to find his apartment destroyed by an explosion. He calls Tyler and will move into Tyler’s house. Together they decide to create an illegal fight club whose rules put up into the world . <??? Qu'as-tu voulu dire là ? Je ne comprends pas. The first rule is “you do not talk about fight club”. Nevertheless this club takes back on new recruits every day. In this place, the narrator will find his virility, trade and communication.

Tyler becomes a leader preaching speech of rebellion facing the effected society and urges members of fight club to accomplish terrorist’s acts.

He creates the Chaos plan whose ambitions are beyond the narrator.<=Si le verbe est pluriel, le sujet doit être pluriel aussi, non ?

Tyler vanishes <Voir plus haut suddenly and the narrator goes in search of him. (In) this way he discovers that Tyler and him form only one people person." <Aurais-tu oublié que people est un pluriel ? Relis-toi toujours afin d'éliminer ce genre de faute.

Merci de m'aider , j'en ai vraiment besoin :x

C'est à faire pour le 1 er octobre

[Sasa07]

Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de lire mon texte, j'avoue avoir repiqué certains passages, mais l'anglais n'est pas mon fort donc bon :3 enfin voilà, merci beaucoup ! J'aimerais savoir si cela se voit beaucoup ou non ?

[Jean B]

J'aimerais savoir si cela se voit beaucoup ou non ?