A7xfoREVer Posté(e) le 27 mai 2013 Signaler Posté(e) le 27 mai 2013 Bonjour à tous! Comme son titre l'indique, je vous demande une petite aide pour me confirmer mon orale d'anglais, des conseils pour m'améliorer... Enfin bref , voilà ce que j'ai preparée: Good Morning, nice to meet you! My name is Hermine, I'm fiveteen years old and I live in *******. In my family, there are 4 pepople. I've got 1 brother, he is older than me, is eighteen. My parents divorced five years ago. Now, I'm living with my mother and my step-father. I visit my father 2 days a week and we spend summer holidays together. I get on very well with mu step-sister, she is really nice. I'm very shy and touchy, this is my principal fault. But, I think, I'am often patient and reponsable. In my free time, I like listening to any type of music, but overall rock! I'm into video games but I'm drawing too. I don't mind watching TV but I prefer going to cinema, and lastly, I'm not crazy about sports! At school, my second foreign language is spanish, I haven't taken an optional subject. My favourite subject at school is French, because I read a lot and I'm interested in the litterature. Unfortunately, I still don't know what I'd like to do in the future. This summer, I wiil probably in Brittany, I will see my family. I've already been to Spain, Morocco, and Tunisia. I love travelling abroad or in France, because I like discovering new food, and also, I enjoy seeing new places and differents cultures. Thank you for your attention!
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 27 mai 2013 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 27 mai 2013 Bonsoir, Bonjour à tous ! Comme son mon/le titre l'indique, je vous demande une petite aide pour me confirmer mon orale d'anglais, des conseils pour m'améliorer... Enfin bref , voilà ce que j'ai préparée : <Bescherelle ou Bled, au secours ! Good Morning, nice to meet you! My name is Hermine, I'm fifteen years old and I live in *******. In my family, there are 4 people. I've got 1 brother, he is older than me, he is eighteen. My parents divorced five years ago. Now I'm living with my mother and my step-father. I visit my father 2 days a week and we spend the summer holidays together. I get on very well with my step-sister, she is really nice. I'm very shy and touchy, this is my principal fault. But I think I'm often patient and responsible. In my free time, I like listening to any type of music, but overall rock! I'm into video games but I'm drawing too. I don't mind watching TV but I prefer going to the cinema and lastly I'm not crazy about sports! At school, my second foreign language is Spanish, I haven't taken an optional subject. My favourite subject at school is French because I read a lot and I'm interested in the literature. Unfortunately, I still don't know what I'd like to do in the future. This summer, I will probably stay in/ ou bien go to/ Brittany where I will see visit my family members. I've already been to Spain, Morocco and Tunisia. I love travelling abroad or in France because I like discovering new food and I also enjoy seeing new places and differents cultures. Thank you for your attention!
A7xfoREVer Posté(e) le 27 mai 2013 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 27 mai 2013 D'accord d'accord merci beaucoup pour cette correction, ça me sera très utile!
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