Conte Humoristique à Corriger

[max 562]

bonjour,

Je dois faire un conte humoristique au prétérit pouvez vous m'aider à le corriger svp ?

Thanks

En français :

C’est l’histoire de trois petits cochons. Le premier était mince et il avait une petite cochonne qui l’aimait beaucoup. Le deuxième qui était l’un de ses deux frères n'était ni trop gros ni trop mince et était très beau et ne fesaisait que se regarder dans son miroir toute la journée. Le troisième qui était donc le frère des deux autres était très gros et il était très tellement riche qu’il avait acheté une belle voiture de la marque Porsche à 100 000 dollars. Les trois frères qui habitaient encore chez leurs parents décideraièrent de construire une maison chacun. Le premier la construisait en paille car il fait bien chaud dedans, le deuxième en bois car il trouvait sa ça beau et le troisième en brique car il trouvait cela solide.

Une fois leurs maisons finies, les trois petits cochons étaient heureux dans leurs habitations. Jusqu’au jour où une sorcière méchante passa par là et leurs jeta un sort. Le premier petit cochon perdrait sa femme, le deuxième son miroir du deuxième se cassa, et le troisième une tuile de la maison du troisième tomba sur le pare-brise de sa voiture qui et le fissura. Les trois petits cochons se sentirent malheureux, alors ils décidaèrent de s’entraider. Le premier apprist aux autres à séduire, le deuxième apprist aux autres à être à la mode et le troisième aida ses deux frères à trouver un travail. Le premier petit cochon retrouva sa femme, le deuxième racheta un miroir et le troisième appela Carglass pour réparer le pare-brise de sa voiture. Le premier trouva un travail et apprist à être beau, le deuxième trouva une femme et un travail et le troisième trouva une femme et apprist à être beau. Mais cela ne dura pas longtemps. Le premier perdit son travail, le deuxième perdit sa femme et son travail et le troisième perdit également sa femme.

Cela prouve bien que dans la vie il est impossible de tout avoir !

En anglais :

This is the story of three little pigs. The first was thin and there was a little slut who loved the second was one of his two brother was neither too fat nor too thin and was very nice and spanked that look in the mirror all day. The third was therefore the brothers of the other two were very close and he was very rich so he bought a beautiful brand car porch to 100,000 dollars. The three brothers who still lived with their parents decide to build a house each of the first built in straw because it is very hot inside the second timber as it was his beautiful and the third brick because he found it solid.

Once finished their three little pigs houses were happy in their homes. Until an evil witch came by and cast a spell. The first little pig loses his wife, his second mirror broke, and the third a tile of his house fell on the windshield of his car that cracked. The three little pigs feel unhappy, so he decided to help each other. The first taught others to seduce, the second taught others to be fashionable and the third helped his two brothers to find a job. The first little pig found his wife bought a second mirror and the third called Carglass for the windshield of his car. The first found a job and got to be beautiful, the second found a wife and a job and found a third woman and learned to be beautiful. But it did not last long. The first lost his job the second loses his wife and his job, and the third also lost his wife.

This proves that in life you can not have everything!

Thanks !

[Jean B]

Bonjour, Max.

This is the story of three little pigs. The first was thin and there was a little slut who loved him. Nouvelle phrase> The second, who was one of his other two brothers of course, was neither too fat nor too thin and was very handsome and kept on looking at himself in the mirror all day long. The third, who was therefore the brother of the other two, was very big and so rich that he bought a beautiful Porsche car worth 100,000 dollars. The three brothers who still lived at their parents' decided to build a house each. Nouvelle phrase> The first built it with straw because it is very hot inside, the second with timber as it was beautiful and the third with brick because he found it strong.

Once they had built their three houses, the three little pigs were happy in their homes. Until an evil witch came by and cast a spell. The first little pig lost his wife, the second's mirror broke and a tile of the third one's house fell on the windshield of his car that cracked. The three little pigs felt unhappy, so they decided to help each other. The first taught the other two to charm, the second taught the others to be fashionable and the third helped his two brothers to find a job. The first little pig found his wife, the second little pig bought a second mirror and the third little pig called Carglass to repair the windshield of his car. The first got a job and learned how to be beautiful, the second got a wife and a job and the third got a wife and learned how to be beautiful. But it did not last long. The first lost his job, the second lost his wife and his job and the third also lost his wife.

This proves that you cannot have everything in life!

Thanks !

[max 562]

Merçi

[Jean B]

Merci