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[Anaïs0563]

Bonjour! Pouvez vous corriger ce texte s'il vous plait?

Two years ago, I am left to Canet en Roussillon with my family. We stayed over there two weeks, we lived in a small apartment near the beach. We made activities as kart and treetop adventure park. We went to the swimming pool but what I preferred it was the beach. We ate on the hot sand, then we were going to bathe. It was beautiful days. We had even already made a ballad by boat, it was magnificent. At the end of the holidays, we went shopping and I had bought the memories for ever to remember myself of this city.

Merci davance!

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour! Pouvez vous corriger ce texte s'il vous plait?

Two years ago I am left to Canet en Roussillon with my family. <Le preterit est un temps simple. We stayed two weeks over there, we lived in a small apartment near the beach. We made enjoyed outdoor activities as karting and treetop adventure park. We went to the swimming pool but what I preferred it was the beach. <Pas de double sujet en anglais, c'est à mémoriser. We ate on the hot sand, then we were going to bathe had a swim. It was a beautiful days time. <Après "It was", tu ne peux avoir qu'un singulier. We had even already made a ballad by boat ride/trip, it was magnificent. At the end of the holidays, we went shopping and I had bought the memories for ever to remember myself of this city.

Merci davance!