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[Anaïs0563]

Bonjour à tous . J'ai besoin d'une petite correction s'il vous plait!

The statue of Liberty is situated in New York, on the island of Liberty. It's real name is "Liberty enlightening the World" who means "statue éclairant le monde " in French. It was inaugurated on October 28th, 1886 by Claveland. It was sculptured by Frederic Auguste Bartholdi with the cooperation of Gustave Eiffel. It is 46,5 meters high, possesses 354 steps and weighs 200 tons.

The crown of this statue possesses 7 rays which represent 7 seas and continents of the planet.

This statue was offered by France in sign of friendship between both nations. In the left hand it holds a tablet which symbolizes the justice. It welcomes more than 4.2 million visitors a year.

Merci d'avance!!

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour à tous . J'ai besoin d'une petite correction s'il vous plait!

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The crown of this statue possesses 7 rays which represent the 7 seas and continents of the planet.

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Merci d'avance!!

[Anaïs0563]

Merci beaucoup pour cette correction qui m'a beaucoup aidée!