Ecrire Un Résumé Au Présent Perfect

[leam44]

Bonjour

Alors voilà, je dois écrire un résumé du film "Je suis une légende" (avec Will Smith).

Le tout dans l'ordre chronologique de l'histoire et au present perfect.

Pour ce qui est de l'anglais j'ai des difficultés (d'ailleur je ne c'est pas si j'ai bon au niveau de l'emploi du temps, si il faut le mettre tout le temps ou pas...)

PS : j'ai du m'aider d'un traducteur pour les mots que je ne savais pas...

Merci d'avance pour votre aide !

I am legend

The story takes place in the New York city. The americans researches have found a remedy to cure the cancer in 100% of cases. Unfortunately the virus have had unwanted effects and transformed nobody in creature of the shade. The mutants kill any form of life. The colonel Robert Neville, a high-level scholar has loaded of found a remedy of virus. While the virus ravages the rest of the population, we decided to evacuate the city. At the time of the evacuation of her wife "Anna" and her daughter "Marley", her daughter gave her little dog, "Samantha" for stay up him. While the helicopter began rise, it was collided by an other rescue helicopter. Everything the family died.

Mysteriously immunized against the evil, Neville is today the last man in the New York city. Since 3 years, he has spreaded every day, of radio messages for

of possible survivor. Has by to hunt, he has dedicated a part of his time has to find an antidote. But a day after to have be to trap by monsters, he lost his dog Sam, which saved her from creatures at the price of its life. The tomorrow, he avenged and found in bad situation, again. But fortunately, he was saved by "Anna" and "Ethan" of survivors. But the tomorrow the creatures reappeared near the house. For to protect itself, they went in under ground. They perceived while an antidote worked on a guinea pig. Neville has gave the remedy to Anna, then hid her she and her son before committing suicide. After several days, Anna and Ethan have joined a refuge camp further north. She gave then the antidote of famous Robert Neville.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

C'est nous faire et te faire une double injure que :

- primo prétendre que tu t'es aidé du traducteur seulement pour les mots que tu ne savais pas, ce qui revient à induire que nous sommés nés avec la dernière averse

- deusio nous infliger la lecture d'un pareil charabia qui n'a de ci de là qu'une vague ressemblance avec l'anglais.

Personnellement, j'aide volontiers toutes celles et ceux qui font preuve de bonne volonté même si leur niveau de langue laisse souvent plus qu'à désirer.

Mais je refuse systématiquement de perdre mon temps avec les fainéants qui pensent avoir trouvé la panacée en postant ici le résultat d'un traducteur automatique.

Conseil : plutôt que perdre ton temps à écrire n'importe quoi n'importe comment, au mépris des règles de grammaire les plus élémentaires et à nous en infliger la lecture, tu serais bien mieux avisé de reprendre toutes les bases du collège, de les potasser à fond afin d'en maîtriser le minimum quand tu t'assiéras devant ton sujet d'anglais en juin prochain.

PS : j'ai du m'aider d'un traducteur pour les mots que je ne savais pas...

[Starvol]

Bonjour.

Pour les mots que je ne savais pas

[leam44]

euh... je suis désolé je me suis trompé de texte. c'était pas celui là. :s

C'est bien celui-çi par contre :

(Est-ce que vous pouvez quand même jeter un coup d'oeil svp)

Merci quand même

Résumé du film "Je suis une légende" - Ecrire au present perfect.

I am legend.

The story has been turn in the New York city. Americans researches have found a remedy against the cancer. Unfortunately, the remedy has mutated a dangerous virus. The dangerous virus transformed the human in creature of the shadow. The creature have killed any life on earth. Robert Neville has been a scientist who has unable to stop the spread of the terrible virus that was incurable and man-made. The virus make enormously of victims. At the time of the evacuation of the city, Robert Neville have accompanied his family in rescue helicopter. At the time of leave, his wife Anna and his daughter Marley have gave her dog Samantha. When helicopter took off, they have been to collide by an other rescue helicopter. His wife and daughter died. Since three years now, Robert Neville has been the last human survivor. He has made daily radio message, desperate to find any other survivors, and has looked a solution against the virus Krippin. But a day, after the hunting, the creature of the shadow have trapped. Neville made save "in extremist" by his dog Sam at risk of her life. The tomorrow, he has willed take revenge. But fortunately, after be in bad situation, he made save by Anna and Ethan, of survivors. But the worst staied to come. The creature have folloed the car, to in the district. They went in under ground for protect. It's then, Neville has saw that a remedy had worked on a guinea pig. He gave the antidote has Anna, then has hid. Robert Neville gave his life for this remedy. After several days, Anna et Ethan have joined a refuge camp. She has gave the antidote of famous Robert Neville.