maud976 Posté(e) le 11 janvier 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 11 janvier 2004 Bonsoir, J'ai essayé de corriger mes fautes...Mais pourriez vous me dire si elles sont justes et compréhensibles. Merci d'avance 5. She was an eye-witness to what happened. Justify She was an eye-witness because when the door opened, she looked through the window and she saw the visitor. 6.She understood that something unusual was happening when she heard A man’s voice which sounded very angry. Indeed, she was surprised that someone came to her house being angry and that her mother shout. 9. Yes, she was happy that someone came and rang at the door because anyone was waiting, and it was exiting for Francine. Because, she thought can take out of her bedroom. (elle pensait pouvoir sortir de sa chambre
icy_blue Posté(e) le 11 janvier 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 11 janvier 2004 hello I modified a few things in your text, tell me what you think about it because i don't ahve the original text so i am just guessing what wa happening... 5. She was an eye-witness to what happened. Justify She was an eye-witness because when the door opened, she looked through the window and she saw the visitor. When the door opened, she was looked through the window and saw the visitor. She was what happened and that's why she was an eye-witness. 6.She understood that something unusual was happening when she heard A man’s voice which sounded very angry. Indeed, she was surprised that someone came to her house being angry and that her mother shout. She heard an unknown man's voice. It sounded really frustrated. She realized that something unsual was about to begin. To her surprise she heard a her mother scream. 9. Yes, she was happy that someone came and rang at the door because anyone was waiting, and it was exiting for Francine. Because, she thought can take out of her bedroom. (elle pensait pouvoir sortir de sa chambre Yes, Francine was relieved when her doorbell rang because it meant that somone was waiting at the door and she'll soon be able to escape. ( or run away, go out of her room....)
icy_blue Posté(e) le 12 janvier 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 12 janvier 2004 no problem and glad to be helpful.... ops....: To her surprise she heard a her mother scream.
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