Correction.

[Invité Lu']

Bonsoir,

j'aimerai pouvoir me faire corriger si possible, sur un texte fait par moi-même, et en même temps pouvoir comprendre mes erreurs. C'est un sujet d'invention dans lequel il faut décrire l'objet, expliquer à quoi il peut servir, tout ça... Il fallait également mettre quelques phrases en forme passive.

Voici mon texte :

Latest Invention... A "camera" very original...

What is it ?

You want to take a photo but you forgot your camera or your mobile phone ?

No problem !

The "Glasses-Camera" are the solution to this problem !

These glasses have a form completely normal, like any other.

As these :

(bon bah là j'ai mis une photo c'est sur diapo)

This prototype also works with sunglasses, as you can see in this picture !

Why this innovation can be useful, what its advantages ?

Imagine two seconds : you walk in the street or in another place, and there you see a beautiful landscape. However, you realize that you don't have your camera in your pocket... But thanks to your new glasses, you can now take this landscape that you like so much ! Isn't that wonderful ?!

These glasses can also be used during a concert for example. No need to waste time to get out your device, it is already ready to use ! And In addition to that, you don't miss the concert !

This therefore means that in any situation, the use of this item is extremely practical, in so far as it owns a number of advantages.

In fact, the "Glasses-Camera" limits considerably the risk of theft and their use is very simple, it's what we will see in the next section, where we will explain their system.

In addition, take pictures with glasses is more discreet, a journalist may be interested by this, for example.

How does it work ?

It's very simple !

First, for take a picture or video, you will just press a small button on the hinge of your glasses (for stop taking a video, simply press again on the button hinge), the operation remains the same on sunglasses.

Also, the objective of your "Glasses-Camera" is located in the bridge of your glasses, therefore, what you see your eyes and what you want to photograph, will the same thing that you will see on your pictures. An USB port is located on the inner side of the temple on your glasses, an USB cable may be joined on your computer or your mobile phone for watching your photos or videos ! The transfer of your photos and videos on your computer or your mobile phone, can also be done from the bluetooth embedded in the item, it activated by pressing the earpiece of your glasses. However, the battery who is on the frame is decreased by the use of bluetooth. But don't panic ! The "Glasses-Camera" is simply charged with a light source !

(en dessous j'ai mis un schéma de lunette, en anglais, les mots soulignés appartiennent au schéma ^^)

En vous remerciant d'avance...

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Latest Invention... A very original "camera"... <Qu'il soit seul ou précédé d'un adverbe, l'adjectif se place DEVANT le nom, crénom !

What is it?

You want to take a photo but you forgot your camera or your mobile phone ?

No problem

The "Camera-Glasses" are the solution to this problem! <Dans un nom composé de nom + nom, celui des deux qui qualifie l'autre et prend donc valeur d'adjectif se place également DEVANT. Logique, non ? C'est à mémoriser.

These glasses have a completely normal form, like any other. < Bis !

As these :

(bon bah là j'ai mis une photo c'est sur diapo)

This prototype also works with sunglasses, as you can see on this picture!

Why can this innovation can be useful, what are its advantages?< Revois d'urgence la formation de la tournure interrogative.

Imagine two seconds: you're walking in the street or in another place, and there you see a beautiful landscape. However, you realize that you don't have your camera in your pocket... But thanks to your new glasses, you can now take this landscape that you like so much! Isn't that wonderful?

These glasses can also be used during a concert for example. No need to waste time to get out your device, it is already ready to for use! And In addition to that, you don't miss the concert!

This therefore means that in any situation, the use of this item is extremely practical, in so far as it owns a number of advantages.

In fact, the "Camera-Glasses" considerably limits the risk of theft and their use is very simple, it's what we will see in the next section, where we will explain their system. <glasses est un nom pluriel.

In addition, taking pictures with glasses is more discreet, a journalist may be interested by this, for example.

How does it work ?

It's very simple!

First, for to take a picture or video, you will just press a small button on the hinge of your glasses (for to stop taking a video, simply press again on the button hinge), the operation remains the same on sunglasses.<L'expression du but : pour/afin de faire qqch = to/in order to do sth. C'est une règle élémentaire qu'il est grand temps de maîtriser.

Also, the objective of your "Camera-Glasses" is located in the bridge of your glasses, therefore, what you see through your eyes and what you want to photograph will be the same thing that you will see on your pictures. An USB port is located on the inner side of the temple on your glasses, an USB cable may be joined on your computer or your mobile phone for watching your photos or videos! The transfer of your photos and videos on your computer or your mobile phone can also be done from the bluetooth embedded in the item, it is activated by pressing the earpiece of your glasses. However, the battery who which is on the frame is decreased by the use of bluetooth. But don't panic! The "Camera-Glasses" is are simply charged with from a light source!

(en dessous j'ai mis un schéma des lunettes en anglais, les mots soulignés appartiennent au schéma ^^)