India

[Ceski]

Bonjour,

J'aurai besoin d'être corrigé, je sais pas si ce que j'ai mis est juste ou pas, si je dois supprimer ou ajouter des choses ?

Voici la tâche finale : You take part in a selection to become a journalist for the BBC World Service. You have to present a 2mn TV photo-report about Today's India.

En fait, je vais faire un diaporama en images en présentant l'Inde.

J'ai tout d'abord mis ce que j'allais dire à l'oral :

I present you a slide show about Today's India

So I will speak about India. India is divous with creeds, religions, cultures and languages.

India's population today counts about 1,15 billion inhabitant, and for 2030, it will increase of 1,6 billion.

The percentage of Hindu people is 80 per cent and the percentage of muslim people is 14 per cent.

New Delhi is the capital city and Mumbai is the most city in India.

In the country, they speak Hindi and English. Also, practise Induism and the Muslim who make up the religions .

The India's uses the rupee as the main currency

India is a a federal democratic nation but before 1947 India was a British colony. In August 1947 India became indepedent thanks to 2 non-violent leaders : Gandhi and Nehru.

Agricultural products, textile goods, gems and jewelry, sofware services and technology, engineering goods, chemicals, leather products who includes the major economic sectors .

In India, the india's play something the hockey and cricket because it's games very popular in the country

India is the dream industry with Bolywood.

A lot of people associate India with Bolywood. Bollywood includes a business of stories because it has a good amount of actions, romances, nice lovely songs, dances and dramas !

Economic and social changes are Economic boom, leading sectors, film industry, consumer society, emergence of a middle-class

Challenges India faces today are the caste system, the sex discrimination, arranged marriages and the overpopulation poverty

Merci d'avance.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

I am going to present you a slide show about Today's India.

So I will speak about India. India is divous has various with creeds, religions, cultures and languages.

India's population today counts is about 1,15 billion inhabitants and for 2030, it will increase of by 1,6 billion before 2030. <1 milliard 15 millions est bien un pluriel, non ? Relis-toi donc.

The percentage of Hindu people is 80 per cent and the percentage of muslim people is 14 per cent.

New Delhi is the capital city and Mumbai is the most populated city in India.

In the country, they people speak Hindi and English. They also practise Hinduism and the Muslim Islam who which make up the prevailing religions.

The India's main currency uses is the rupee. as the

India is a federal democratic nation but before 1947 India was a British colony. In August 1947 India became indepedent thanks to 2 non-violent leaders : Gandhi and Nehru.

Agricultural products, textile goods, gems and jewelry, sofware services and technology, engineering goods, chemicals, leather products who includes represent the major economic sectors.

In India, the india's Indians play something the hockey and cricket because it's these games are very popular in the country. <Ces sports sont l'un des "héritages" de la colonisation britannique.

India's is the dream Hindi-language film industry with is known as Bollywood.

A lot of people associate India with Bollywood. Bollywood includes a business of stories because it has a good amount of actions, romances, nice lovely songs, dances and dramas! <Je ne comprends pas ce que tu as voulu dire, désolé.

Revois tes sources car tu laisses entendre que Bollywood représente toute l'industrie cinématographique indienne. Or c'est seulement le cinéma tourné en langue Hindi, ce que j'ai précisé.

Economic and social changes are an economic boom, leading sectors, film industry, consumer society, emergence of a middle-class

Challenges India faces today are the caste system, the sex discrimination, arranged marriages, and the overpopulation and poverty.