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Bonjour

Voila comme vous le savez surement j'ai fait un premier sujet mais ils était trop brouillon et n'ayant pu le supprimer ou modifier je recommence a nouveau donc j'ai une expression orale en continue a faire pour mardi (reporter) le sujet étant: Vous êtes un journaliste et avez assisté au procès de Monsieur Barnes. A travers une intervention de 2 minutes, vous expliquez ce qui c'est passer pendant le procès. Le procès n'est pas inventé, l'accusation aussi, ils sont tirés d'un film vu en classe.J'ai fait le texte je voudrai bien svp une correction. Et aussi désolé pour les fautes encore.

Merci de votre aide.

Hello, today I assisted to trial of Mr. BARNES. The trial passed in good condition. Mr.BARNES found guilty, he had commit a hit an run after the accident,caused the Tuesday, may 17th in the afternoon, to Coner of Greensville Road and Holland Avenue.

The witnesses presents in the place of the event, they have attend an violent accident. The accident, saw the sportcar of Mr.BARNES enter in the motocycle. Then Mr.BARNES didn't brake and get off but he has drive on. While the victim was in heart attack. Today, the victim is go into a coma. The next day of accident Mr BARNES is going a the police for make a statement. The policeman has enforce the law because he has commit a crime. The trial being today we have heard the witnesses of the event. The vicitm no present, only his lawyer was present and Mr.BARNES defending alone when he risk a probable life sentance

The first witness of the scene, Miss Penelope Sanford,, admit in definitive have lie upon on the stage.

The second witness, the Colonel John Hoey, admit bear false witness at the police.

The third witness, Mr Malcolm Stuart saw the accident and the accused didn't stop at the stop sign.of crossroad.

And the last witness, Mr Sam Peterson, dead drunk has no true information.

In the end, the judge in lack of evidences abide by the law, and a found guilty the murderer a fine of 2000$ and no jail ans supprise the court.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Pour la énième fois, s'exprimer en anglais ne consiste pas à passer par l'écrit ni, à plus forte raison, par la " traduction " d'un texte préalablement écrit en français.

C'est un non-sens, une aberration qui ne sert tout au plus qu'à te faire multiplier des fautes de toute nature, parmi lesquelles des impropriétés de termes sans compter les fautes de grammaire proprement dites.

Bonjour

Voilà comme vous le savez sûrement j'ai fait un premier sujet mais ils était trop brouillon et n'ayant pu le supprimer ou modifier je recommence à nouveau. Donc j'ai une expression orale en continu à faire pour mardi (reporter) le sujet étant : Vous êtes un journaliste et avez assisté au procès de Monsieur Barnes. A travers une intervention de 2 minutes, vous expliquez ce qui s'est passé pendant le procès. Le procès n'est pas inventé, l'accusation aussi, ils sont tirés d'un film vu en classe.J'ai fait le texte je voudrai bien SVP une correction. Et aussi désolé pour les fautes encore.

Merci de votre aide.

Hello Good morning/Good afternoon, <Comme tu t'adresses avant tout à ton professeur, il est préférable de ne pas utiliser une formule familière. Tes camarades de classe ne t'en tiendront pas rigueur et ton professeur appréciera sûrement.

Today I assisted to attended the trial of Mr. BARNES. The trial passed in good condition went off smoothly. Mr.BARNES was found guilty, he had committed a hit-and-run offence after the accident caused the on Tuesday May 17th in the afternoon at the corner of Greensville Road and Holland Avenue.

The witnesses who were present in at the place of the event they have attend an could see a violent accident. The accident, saw the Mr Barnes' sportscar of Mr.BARNES enter in bumped/ crashed into the motocycle. Then Mr.BARNES didn't pull up/brake and but he get off but he has drive drove on. Meanwhile the victim was in has had a heart attack and has gone into a coma today. The next day afterof the accident Mr BARNES is going a reported it to the police for make and made a statement. The policeman has enforced the law because he Mr Barnes has commit had committed a crime. The trial being today we have heard the witnesses of the event. The victim was not present, only his lawyer was present and Mr.BARNES defending defended himself alone when although he risks a probable life sentence.

The first witness of the scene, Miss Penelope Sanford, eventually admittted in definitive have lie she had lied upon on the stage and had just repeated someone else's testimony.

The second witness, the Colonel John Hoey, also admitted bear he had given the police false evidence. witness at the police.

The third witness, Mr Malcolm Stuart saw the accident and declared the accused defendant didn't stop at the crossroads stop sign of crossroad.

And the last witness, Mr Sam Peterson, was dead drunk has and had no true information.

In the end, in through lack of evidence abide by the law, the judge and a found Mr Barnes guilty the murderer of a hit-and-run offence and a fine of fined him $ 2000 and no jail ans supprise but pronounced no prison sentence, which surprised the court.