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Bonjour, j'ai un DM à rendre pour mercredi soir, il est déjà écrit mais j'aimerais juste qu'on me corrige.

Merci beaucoup.

I'm an Addict Jackpot. In fact, I saw a good twenty times the flim Jackpot, whose main actors are Cameron Diaz and Ashton Kutcher. This movie is for me the best in the world, it can make you laugh as cry. In addition, it comes fully to take the place of the characters.

This movie was released in 2008 and was directed by Tom Vaughan.

Joy has just been dumped by her boyfriend, Jack has been fired from his job. Convinced by their respective friends, they end up going to Las Vegas and after a night of madness, they get up the next day to discover that they were married. When they decide to cancel their wedding, Jack won the big jackpot ($ 3 million) after playing the token Joy. A judge refuses to annul their marriage and condemn them to live together for 6 months, under pain of not seeing the $ 3 million. Each attempt therefore rot the life of another in the hope that the other is resigned to annul the marriage and abandon three million. Until they begin to fall in love with each other.

There are so many good quotes in this movie. My favorite is "You're falling in love with your wife, you idiot."

This is just stunning given the context, because that is the goal of history at the bottom, fall in love with his wife.

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Bonjour,

Bonjour,

J'ai un DM à rendre pour mercredi soir, il est déjà écrit mais j'aimerais juste qu'on me corrige.

Merci beaucoup.

I'm an Addict Jackpot a "Jackpot" addict. <Apprends à utiliser le nom composé, c'est très pratique. In fact, I saw the film "Jackpot" a good twenty times, whose main actors are Cameron Diaz and Ashton Kutcher.<Mieux vaut ne pas séparer le COD de son verbe. To me, this movie is for me the best in the world, it can make you laugh as well as cry. In addition, it comes fully to completely / totally puts you in the characters' place/ in the characters' shoes. <Méfies-toi des calques du français. Sers-toi d'un bon dictionnaire.

This movie was released in 2008 and was directed by Tom Vaughan.

Joy has just been dumped by her boyfriend, Jack has been fired from his job. Convinced by their respective friends, they end up going to Las Vegas and after an amazing night of madness, they get up the next day to discover that they were married.<Attention au calque du français, bis ; madness c'est la folie au sens propre, pourvoyeuse des hôpitaux psychiatriques. When they decide to cancel their wedding, Jack hits / wins the big jackpot ($ 3 million) after playing the token Joy's token. - Par définition, le gros lot est gros. Merci Monsieur de Lapalisse. biggrin.png

- Toutes les fois que possible, pense à utiliser le génitif (cas possessif). A judge refuses to annul / nullify their marriage / to declare their marriage void and condemnS mad.gif them to live together for 6 months, under on pain of not seeing the $ 3 million. Therefore ach both attempt to rot the life of another ruin each other's life in the hope that the other is resigned resigns to annul the marriage and abandon three million. Until they begin to fall in love with each other.

There are so many good quotes in this movie. My favorite is "You're falling in love with your wife, you idiot."

This is just stunning given the context because that is the goal of history the story at the bottom, fall in love with his wife. Ne confonds pas histoire, la grande histoire, celle qu'on apprend à l'école = history et histoire, le récit/conte/scénario = story.

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