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[jogy999]

Bonsoir,

voilà je voulais savoir si vous pouviez, s'il vous plait, m'aider à corriger ces phrases ? :

Unhesitatingly, Henry Ford is the one that represents the most the economic success.

The reason that seems obvious to me is related to the respective time of these two characters.

Henry Ford is the origin of Fordism. In fact it was him who in 1913 implemented the famous assembly line for his famous Model T, a system that has helped considerably increase the production to a larger scale and to generate amazing income for the period.

Ford embodies the second industrial revolution that is automobile. It's thanks to him that there is mass production. If he had not invented that Steve Jobs wouldn't have produced so much Iphones.

Steve Jobs had only finally "ride the informatic wave" already well established when he founded the company in 1976 and the Apple Macintosh in 1984. It embodies the third industrial revolution that is IT, the digital revolution and globalization.

For me they are all heroes because they have somehow changed the world and make it easier for many people and indeed for the whole world.

Thanks a lot ! : )

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bon, je ne te réclamerai pas de droits d'auteur pour cette fois mais tu aurais dû indiquer l'énoncé de ton travail, faute de quoi on pourrait se perdre en conjectures.

Bonsoir,

voilà je voulais savoir si vous pouviez, s'il vous plait, m'aider à corriger ces phrases ? :

Unhesitatingly, Henry Ford is the one that best represents the most the economic success.

The reason that seems obvious to me is related to the respective time of these two characters.

Henry Ford is the origin of behind Fordism. In fact it was him who in 1913 first implemented the famous assembly line for his famous Model T, a system that has helped considerably increase the production to a larger scale and to generate amazing income for the period.

Ford embodies the second industrial revolution that is automobile. It's thanks to him that there is mass production. If he had not invented that Steve Jobs wouldn't have produced so much many Iphones.

After all Steve Jobs had only finally just to "ride the informatic computing wave" already well established when he founded the company in 1976 and the Apple Macintosh in 1984. It embodies the third industrial revolution that is IT, the digital revolution and globalization.

For me Personally / To my mind / If you ask me / As far as I am concerned / they are all both heroes because they have somehow changed the world and make made it easier for many people and indeed for the whole world.

Thanks a lot ! : )

[jogy999]

Bonsoir,

je voulais vous remercier pour votre généreuse aide, merci beaucoup